1st place!
@everydaydreaming everydaydreamingxxi
The Blueties and The Beast:
Title: 4
Cover : 4.5
Description: 9
Prologue/1st chapter: 4
Plot : 18
Flow : 14
Emotions: 8.5
Grammar/vocab : 13
Creativity: 5
Dialogue : 4
Overall : 5
Total: 89/100
Editor Review:- Okay, so I've checked out your story and the storyline was pretty interesting. It seemed like Demon AU. Your book name is actually quite catchy but it kind of seemed like more of a romance story unless you read the description or even check the book cover. (I love the cover tbh) The description was quite good but try not to use a different font for the characters' quotes. Use quotation marks instead. They look a lot more classy and doesn't really hurt your eyes. The prologue was beautifully written with skilled vocabulary but for a prologue, it's a little bit too big. I would prefer a shorter description with just the main hint of the plot of your book. Your plot, as I said before, is quite interesting. Jimin being the leader of Blueties who save the world from a monster-like inhumane being and so so. The story flow was okay. Not too slow, not too fast. Try to keep it up. Because of your vocabulary usage, the words take out beautiful emotions but some of the adjectives and adverbs are sometimes too hard to understand the feeling of the said character. You didn't seem to have many grammatical errors which is good but try to avoid it as it hinders the wanting-to-read-more feeling of your readers. Your creativity is nice, your plot idea is unique which makes the story more interesting. Try giving a bit more dialogue to the characters and it's perfect!2nd place!
@Mrs_Namnam Mrs_Namnam
My guardian angel:
BOOK TITLE 04/05
BOOK COVER 04/05
DESCRIPTION 07/10
PROLOGUE (FIRST CHAPTER) 04/05
PLOT: 19/20
CHAPTERS & FLOW 13/15
EMOTIONS 9/10
GRAMMAR & VOCABULARY 14/15
CREATIONS 4/5
DIALOGUE 5/5
OVERALL 4/5
TOTAL= 87/100
Review: First I would like to say it's a good book. The title is good it matches the storyline very well but there are too many stories with the title with My guardian angel. It wasn't that unique but it suits the story so it's not bad. About the cover, it's a good one but the leaves or something that's on the background kinda ruined its legacy. But it's a very acceptable cover. The description is good but I think it would be much better if you could add a part of a heated conversation as it would make a good description. The prologue is good, it's done great. Chapter flow is good but I kinda felt it's rushed at first chapters. Emotions were expressed but could be done more. Grammar and vocabulary are good. No problems there. Creations are also good. But could improve more. Dialogue is done very well. Overall it's actually an interesting story but needed few improvements. But I actually loved reading it!3rd place
@ameliaphoenix
Idol Companion:
Title: 5
Cover : 3
Description: 8
Prologue/1st chapter : 4
Plot : 18
Flow : 13.5
Emotions : 8
Grammar /vocab : 13.5
Creation : 5
Dialogues: 3
Overall: 4
Total: 85/10
Editor Review:- Alright! Here we go... Your title is cute and catchy as well as your book cover. But the book cover was too bright to match your plot. Keep that in mind. Your description is beautifully written but too big. You could've just written your desired part of your story or maybe just the hint of the plot. Your prologue was too big to be a prologue. It literally could've been the first chapter. As I said for the book description, you could've just written a plot idea or just the hint of it so that readers get the urge to read more. Your story flow was slow but not too much. It's actually a little less than perfect but I would prefer to keep that up. Your usage of vocabulary was nice. You used simple words and I actually really liked it. Cool writing, no lie. Your creativity is what matters when you write a story which makes your story unique. Your plot is very interesting, Jimin meets with an unexpected accident (T-T) and somehow his soul goes to India (?) to meet his soulmate. (But his soulmate is Tae...? Nvm) Your dialogues are cool and understandable. It makes you feel what the said character is feeling. Overall, I would say the book is worth reading.
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