Okay, I'll put in as much of my new ideas into this as possible. I REALLY hope you like this chapter.
-Brittany
RENESMEE CULLEN
I ran upstairs and into my closet. I found a sparkly red dress that came mid-thigh with a pair of glossy red heels to match. I put the outfit on and found a similar dress but in blue. That would be perfect for Chloe. It was sparkly blue, and went down just below the knees. I also found a pair of blue flats to match. "Chloe!" I called from the closet. "Yeah?" she said walking into the closet then gasping. "Oh my God! You look amazing!" she said looking me up and down. I laghed and said "Thanks. Guess what you get to wear?" I said holding the dress and flats out in front of her. She smiled and took the clothes. She walked into the bathroom and changed. She walked out and I said "And you said I looked good!" I said emphasising the 'I'. She laughed in return and we walked out of our room and down the stairs. We walked out to the hangout house and gasped. Alice had thought of everything. There were twinkly lights, a red carpet leading in and one of those big arrows with the lights tracing it over and over that said, 'Party like you mean it!' The arrow pointed to the hangout house door. I laughed as did Chloe. About five minutes later four cars pulled in. Then more and more people arrived and the party began. It was only an hour later when Alice said "Attention Partiers! If you don't remeber it is Renesmee's birthday! Time for cake!" Alice then squeeled in excitement. Emmett and my father walked in, Emmett's muscly back facing us. In front of him was a huge cake. On the other side my dad was helping carry it, even though Emmett didn't need the help at all. It was a six layer cake, and from bottom to top the layers got smaller in size. On the third layer is read 'Happy 16 Birthday Renesmee!' I smiled happily. I stood on my toes carefully in my heels to blow out the candles. I wish for everyone to just have fun at my party. I thought as I took in a deep breath of air. I blew out and made a whoosh sound as the flames went out. Alice began cutting the cake and gave me a big piece that said Renesmee. I smiled then walked to the staircase to find Jacob. I smiled and said "Want half, I can't eat it all." He laughed and nodded. I used my fork to cut the piece equally in half. I grabbed another fork for Jake out of the cabinet of the kitchen space. We smiled as we dug in.
After we finished, we walked around and I noticed Chloe was no where to be found.
CHLOE ZEELY
I was sitting in a chair in the hangout house and eating a piece of cake when someone walked up to me and grabbed me, covering my eyes. I tried to scream but whoever was holding me held my mouth shut and forced me to walk toward the back door of the hangout house. We walked out and I was lifted off my feet and was being carried. Whoever was carrying me was fast because it felt like I was flying at the speed of light. Whoever held me stopped and put me down. I inhaled, only to smell the musty scent of forest. The hand left my face and I could see again. My eyes quickly adjusted to the darkness. I turned around to find someone I thought I'd never see again. It was my brother, Mark. "Why?" I asked. "Why what?" he said as if he didn't understand. "You know exactly what I mean. Why did you kill mom?" I said, this time expecting an actual answer. "Because. She gave us nothing. No freedom at all." he replied back as if this were a casual talk. "She gave you life for God's sake! She did nothing to deserve death!" I yelled at him. "You know Chloe. I can kill you right now. Considering I'm a vampire." he said smiling viciously. "How? Your eyes aren't even red or a golden brown." I replied. He laughed and said "Because I'm special." I sighed and thought 'Great. Just great.' to myself. I then thought of the Cullens. They'll save me. Renesmee will find out that I'm missing. I thought fiercly.
