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1) Message the community account

2) Mention your position, username and which genre.

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Results are at the very bottom of the page.

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Judge: @_miss_idealist_

1. I witnessed a murder by @themysteryisme975

Title- 8 /10
Cover - 8 /10
Blurb- 7 /10
Opening chapter- 9/10
Grammar - 14/15
Originality - 14 /15
Writing style - 4/5
Plot- 9 /10
Enjoyment - 10 /10
Genre relevance - 4 /5

Total: 87

I really enjoyed the story and the ending was so thrilling. I would like to see the next part soon.
The things I loved was the writing style. It really kept me hooked onto your story and compelled me to read till last.
Things I would like you to work upon is blurb. May be you can add a part of your story first and engross the reader and then put the rest part which you have written after that.
I would also suggest to change the font of the title on the cover or you can change the cover too.

2. The Scary Midnight by @SecretlyMe0

Title 7/10
Cover - 7 /10
Blurb- 6 /10
Opening chapter- 10/10
Grammar - 13/15
Originality - 15/15
Writing style - 4 /5
Plot- 9 /10
Enjoyment - 10 /10
Genre relevance - 4 /5

Total: 85

I thoroughly enjoyed the story. It was really amazing and kept me totally engrossed in it. I would like you to change the cover first because because of it you are losing marks. Trust me your story was amazing and I liked the ending very much.
The title gives a horror story vibes but in reality the story is completely different so that was a great twist. I think you should work upon the blurb too. It's very short and not much Attractive. But overall I loved your concept.

3. Starlight by @PriscillaYiadom4

Title 8/10
Cover - 8 /10
Blurb- 6 /10
Opening chapter- 7/10
Grammar - 12/15
Originality - 15/15
Writing style - 3 /5
Plot- 7 /10
Enjoyment - 7/10
Genre relevance - 4/5

Total: 77

Okay I liked the stargate fantasy part and I think you could have made more chapters on that since it seemed a very unique story. But I want you to work on the stories more . The stories are quite simple and they need some twist to make the readers hooked onto your story. I liked the stargate fantasy idea very much.


4. Can you answer me by @dwarkaratna

Title 7/10
Cover - 6 /10
Blurb- 6 /10
Opening chapter- 8/10
Grammar - 14 /15
Originality - 15/15
Writing style - 3/5
Plot- 7/10
Enjoyment - 7/10
Genre relevance - 2/5

Total: 75

You have a very unique concept and I liked it. But it would be more fit in Random genre since a short story shouldn't involve much questions. And I would also suggest you to change the cover and develop your blurb more.

5. Eve Bishop: Psychosexual Killer by @Leon1692

Title 8/10
Cover - 8 /10
Blurb- 7/10
Opening chapter- 8/10
Grammar - 14 /15
Originality - 14/15
Writing style - 4 /5
Plot- 8 /10
Enjoyment - 8/10
Genre relevance - 4 /5

Total: 83

You have an amazing vocabulary and you immense knowledge of your work . I would suggest you to make the chapters little easy to understand which is I am telling from the general public point of view because in that way it would be more widespread to people since all dont have a such a rich Vocabulary but since its your story you have all the rights to decide. I liked the last chapter and sex and betrayal one more. Great going. I would suggest to change the font of your title on cover.




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Okay oof! This took a while to compile. So if i made some mistake please let me know >.< I'm super busy and trying to release these results simultaneously! So I might miss something xD ESSP, If I counted someone's score wrong and you have actually earned a position.

First Position:

I witnessed a murder by @themysteryisme975 87

Second position:

 The Scary Midnight by @SecretlyMe0 85

Third Position:

Eve Bishop: Psychosexual Killer by @Leon1692 83

Congratulations bby <3 We are so proud of you! Don't feel disheartened if you didn't win, we love all the books and this is just a stepping stone.

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