Relationships

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This is a big deal to me! How fast the author makes the relationship happen.
It is not realistic when the reader and Minho kiss after three chapters and then sleep together another two chapters later.

It is wayyyyyy too fast.

I much rather have a slow burn!!!!The characters need build up

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I much rather have a slow burn!!!!
The characters need build up. Like tension. If you rush it, it's unnatural and feels weird asf.

The best is when it's an enemies to lovers-

It starts off like they hate each other but they end up basically in love

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It starts off like they hate each other but they end up basically in love.
It is so cute like-
AGHHHHHHH YES YES YES YES YES
🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋

Another thing:
Please don't make the relationship only last in literally the very last chapter. ITS NOT IT SIS.

By this, I mean, don't have them just "in love" on the very last chapter and then it ends.
Instead, make it so the reader has some detail of the relationship-

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