"Red and white boy er i mean-" -Xisuma(Rewrite)

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(This is mainly in 3rd person, 3rd person is easier to write in. There are certain moments where it will be 1st POV though.)
It was the 1st day of Hermitcraft. Parrots chirping, Wolves barking and a red and white boy passed and injured out in front of a tree.Wait...WHAT.
Xisuma did a double take, sure enough there was a red and white boy er a boy wearing red and white passed out in front of a tree. He seemed to be pretty young(maybe 16 or 17). He also looked a bit like a younger Grian. Xisuma shook his head, now wasn't the time to think of..Grian..he should get stress and help this poor teen.
Stress, Mumbo I need your help. He typed in his communicator.
What is it X? Mumbo and Stress replied instantly
Did someone get hurt Stress asked worriedly.
Uh actually, yes but it isn't someone we know. Xisuma replied
What do you mean? Mumbo replied
Well it's a kid for starters, and I don't recognize him. Xisuma said
Oh... Mumbo simply replied back
Okay, bring him over to my place. Stress says- or well texts.
Uh, that's the problem I don't think I can lift him myself. X said, he chuckled a bit while typing
Okay, I'll get over there ASAP and help. Mumbo replied.
Thanks.
Xisuma turned off his communicator and waited for Mumbo to arrive.
-after Mumbo arrives and they bring him back to Stress's house-
"So stress, how is he." Mumbo asked worriedly
"He's okay, but he had a lot of injuries. He was stab wounds, Axe wounds,burn marks and more! On top of that, he only looks about 17." Stress said and then she sighed
"Yeah, I was thinking the same thing," Xisuma replied examining the boy. "You know he looks a bit familiar.."
"Your right," Mumbo exclaimed also examining the boy
"Can you find out anything about him Mumbo?" Stress asked curiously
"Maybe, I'll check," Mumbo replied, walking over to a nearby computer.
-5 minutes later- (I changed it so that the portal sent him here by accident as it was the last place he had been, before Dream SMP. It sent him to the most update version because the version of HC Tommy is from is very old.)
-Tommy's POV-
I had woken up a few minutes ago but pretended like I didn't hear them talking about me. I was about to pretend to wake up when I heard someone say "Guys I cant find anything on this boy!". Who are they- oh they are referring to me. I'll have them know I am a f^cking man! from Dream SMP a lot." "seriously nothing?" Someone else said. They sounded feminine but I'm not going to assume genders. I decided to just then wake up.
"where am I?" .

Ayyy I'm finnaly done with rewriting this chapter. I made this chapter shorted because I realized that I had a lot of info in there that either 1. I didn't like 2. Wasn't important or 3. Was a spoiler and actually should have been told later. Anyways, hope you enjoyed!

Ps.If you want a shout-out type your name and favorite DSMP character.

-Kylo

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