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Okay, to be fair, I don't think anyone is actually going to answer me but I'm going to ask anyways just in case. 

I'm thinking about rewriting this story just so it's more in-tune with what actually happened in Infinity War/Endgame. Obviously this was written before both movies came out so whatever I wrote was purely what was being speculated at the time and what I thought might happen. But now I'd like to explore the use of Raven (along with her relationship with Peter) in both of these movies.

This is what I'm thinking so far:

- The story takes place through the events of Civil War, Infinity War, and Endgame (maybe a few lines from Homecoming but nothing too serious plot-wise)

- BUT Peter's gang/everyone who'd be in Homecoming is aged up about six years making them about twenty-one during Civil War. That way when everyone's dusted in Infinity War except Raven, it isn't illegal when they bring Peter back (because if we kept it the same then Peter would be sixteen while Raven would be twenty-one and that is highly illegal)

- The events all play out how they would normally


I'm just curious if there's anything you'd like to see. Lines or scenes or ideas? I'm open to anything.

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