A/N I'm sorry if you find any mistakes or anything, but I currently have no computer once again so I'm writing this on my blackberry which is shit when it comes down to writing on here! Anywhoo, I really wanted to write this chapter because I promised @sluttyliam and @lightningandmoments that I would for the past week!
So enjoy the twist at the end! Vote/fan/comment, I love you all
Also, LISTEN TO THE SONG ON THE SIDE! Okay, I think I'm done now
RACHEL'S POV
"Well, I don't know about the rest of you, but I'm exhausted!" Zayn threw himself down on the sofa beside Niall and Emily, pulling Perrie down with him
"I agree, but it was amazing. Thank you for doing this for me" I stood on my tiptoes, placing a kiss on Louis' cheek
"You're welcome baby. What's the time Haz?"
"Umm, wow, 2am" Harry managed to get out between yawns "I guess we better get-"
"Nope, you're all staying the night. We have both my brothers' rooms, a guest room and my dads' room and mine, that's enough for everyone to have one each. As long as we abide by my dad's 'no funny business' rule, you're all okay to stay the night" I smiled at all the exhausted people slumped down in front of me
"Okay, fine Rachel! You win!" Liam chuckled, clearly happy that I said they were allowed to stay the night as well as Louis and Niall. "Can we watch a film first though?"
"Yeah!" Niall screamed in Emily's ear, making her clutch it like someone had just stabbed her in the ear, playfully slapping his shoulder
"What film did you have in mind, Li?" Perrie piped in, snuggling into Zayn's side
"Toy Story 3..?" He began batting his eyelashes at us like some 5 year old girl
"Why did we even ask?" Danielle laughed at how predictable her boyfriend was. Of course he wanted bloody Toy Story 3, that's all he ever wanted...
"In the cabinet, 3rd shelf" I pointed at the glass cabinet in the corner that contained all our movies "Actually, Lou, do you mind if we go to bed? I'm quite tired and not really in the mood to see 5 boys cry..." I turned to face a drowsy Louis who was swaying back and forth, trying yet failing to wipe the sleepyness away from his eyes
"Yeah course, come on baby" he took my hand and began leading me up to my room "Night" we didn't wait for a reply before shutting the bedroom door behind us
I wasn't really tired, I just wanted to show Louis my surprise. Ever since I'd found out I had cancer, I didn't want to miss out on anything. Including sex. But none of the boys I knew seemed special enough for me to give it up to. Then I met Louis, and I realised he was the one I wanted to take my virginity.
We'd tried countless numbers of times, but we were always interrupted by one thing or another, primerilly my dad. But now he wasn't here to stop me, so yes. Tonight is the night...
Louis threw himself on my bed, throwing aside the spare pillows I had on there for decoration while I sorted through my chest of draws.
I took out a pair of sleeping shorts and a top, and a pair of Louis' sweats for him to wear if he got cold, which were immediately thrown at his face, earning me a playful whine from him
"Bitch..." He muttered under his breath, beginning to strip out of his clothes. I couldn't help but stare at his tanned, muscular che- "See anything you like, love?'
I began blushing, causing a chuckle to escape his perfect lips "Umm, I'm just gonna go get changed in the bathroom..."
"Don't be daft babe, I've seen you naked before. I saw you naked the night we met for goodness sake!"
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