Hati an' Broc have walk to hunt great elk over mist mountain. Broc fall down rock side an' break leg. Broc say no kill leg an' will go home. Broc say Hati go to mist mountain an' find elk.
Mist mountain new sun an' new sun walk when Hati hear no storm thunder an' see sky shape fall over hill. Hati think bad spirit Old One story an' Hati has fear. Hati think good spirit Old One story an' think sky fall spirit give Hati great elk.
Sky shape fall over hill an' over hill an' over hill an' Hati see Wise Sprit an' Hati has fear. Wise Spirit is skinny bear an' has many leg an' many long finger. Wise Spirit has shiny rock skin an' Hati break spear on shiny rock skin. Hati has much fear.
Wise Spirit not kill Hati an' Wise Spirit give Hati new food an' Wise Spirit show Hati magic. Hati like Wise Spirit.
Wise Spirit an' Hati take long walk to forest mountain. Wise spirit show Hati many stone an' take many tree an' show Hati new fire magic. Hati make fire magic an' has much happy. Wise Spirit show Hati new fire magic make mud to rock an' make red rock to fire honey an' shiny stone an' show Hati make shiny shape for hunt an' kill enemy.
Hati an' Wise Spirit walk many new sun an' Wise Spirit show Hati sand an' water for ever see. Wise Spirit use fire magic to make sand to hard water rock an' show Hati new string magic an' make new shape for catch fish. Catch fish still much slippy.
Wise Spirit show Hati new shape magic for make mark for many finger an' tell Hati go back to Other an' teach new magic an' new shape an' new many finger mark.
Hati go back to Other in much snow an' with much meat of elk. Hati show Other new fire magic. Other fear an' Hati has happy. Old One has mad an' say fire magic make Ancestor mad. Hati say Ancestor way has much old an' Old One has much fear. Hati kill Old One with new shiny shape.
Many Other fear Hati an' say Hati kill Broc an' Other send Hati to much ice an' snow an' Other say will lay Hati bone in sun if Hati come back. Other give Hati new name. Hati is Lost One..fin
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Short StoryDon't worry, it's not as bad as it sounds ... this is just a few of my flash stories. Each write around 1000 words from a range of science fiction, fantasy and horror genres (22 SF, 2 F, 1 H).