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Author: AlienboyfriendTae

Reviewer: Anxe_Mxrie

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✔︎Cover - 3/5

It's okay, not bad but could be improved however.

✔︎Title - 3/5

Again as I said above, okay-ish but can be improved 

✔︎Blurb - 2/5

This blurb would have been had it not been so overused. It's overused; you don't even have to look for it.

✔︎Grammar - 9/10

Now, this is the thing that makes the book a whole lot of better, the words you used just wow!
Good job on the grammar! 

✔︎Detail - 5/5

Detail is a very important part, and I think you know that very well. The details are very good! Great job author!

✔︎Plot and Originality - 3/10

I mean, what did you expect? It's such an overused plot, the details and the fact that the characters were relatable makes it a little but still though, the plot is too overused.

✔︎Flow of the story - 4/5

Flow of the story seems too fast-paced, like it's moving too fast. Some people may like that, but I, for sure, do not.

✔︎Did you enjoy reading? - 5/5

I did! The details kept me hooked onto it even though it had an overused plot, maybe worth a reread but not more than that in my opinion. 

✔︎Personal Review

Honestly? Not that good. Now, don't get me wrong, I'm not saying it's bad but you could improve a lot! Like really-
The overused plot mainly ruined it for me. But still, good job in the details and grammar!

Thank You!

Total score: 34/50

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