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Please let me know the feedback so I can understand how to write better. I usually write stories out of the top of my head. Sometimes I have to go back to see the story to see the character's name and what kind of relationship they had?

Like for example why was Charlie fearing the little boy on the bicycle?

How did she seem unfazed?
What really happened??

ALSO YOUR THEIRIES ARE APPRECIATED!! I WOULD LILOVE TO DISCUSS WITH Y'ALL ✌🏻

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