This is my second draft please tell me what you think.
What do I need to improve on let me know open to criticism?!
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Pro Heroes
ActionRonnie is one of the main character's he has the power to become invulnerable, but he can not move when he activates it. Ronnie will join Tacoman's team of pro heroes with unorthodox methods. They will climb the ranks by fighting monsters and stoppi...
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This is my second draft please tell me what you think.
What do I need to improve on let me know open to criticism?!
