The Next Step {The Beginning}

A/N about the reading structure.

A/N: hey everyone!

By the title I'm guessing you have an idea what I want to talk to you about.

So, I was thinking instead of having * (stars) to show the characters actions I was thinking we can have it like other story's and when it's a Point Of View, it'll stay that characters POV until the scene ends or the other character has a POV.

I'll give you an example of what I'm thinking.

I'll use a scene from last chapter.

Okay, so this is the original:

*****

Giselle's POV:

Cody doesn't know that I went out with him because of a dare. I do like him, but if he found out that I went out with him because I got dared too, he would never trust me again.

**

Cody: I'm sorry. I didn't-

Giselle: I'd love too. *she smiles*

Cody: really?

Giselle: I had a lot of fun too.

Cody: that's great! *his phones buzzes* I'm sorry, just one second. *he looks at his text* oh my gosh.

*****

But instead, I was thinking we an do this:

**

Giselle's POV:

Cody doesn't know that I went out with him because of a dare. I do like him, but if he found out that I went out with him because I got dared too, he would never trust me again.

Cody: "I'm sorry. I didn't-"

Giselle: "I'd love too." I smile.

Cody: "really?"

Giselle: "I had a lot of fun too."

Cody: "that's great!"

Cody's phone buzzes.

Cody: "I'm sorry, just one second." He says while looking at his text, "oh my gosh."

*****

So please comment or inbox me what style you like best!

I really need some help!

And I'm hoping to get the next chapter up in a couple days so be prepared.

Thank you 😊💕