THE LEAL MINI-AWARDS - Fall Edition [Closed]

└> RESULTS || Best Blurb

A very big thanks to all who participated and judged in this contest! Without you, this awards wouldn't have come this far!

Be sure to respect the judge's opinion. If you have any personal objections, gently query them if you need to know how else your book can be improved!

Since this awards is intended for self-improvement and also promotion, do read the reviews of the other fellow authors and give their books a read when you find them interested! :)

Now without further ado, let's get on with the results!

JUDGES: 
DrizzleTheWolf
ColeReveal

'Amanita: Poison Shot' by marsaumell

Hook: 9/10
Relevancy: 10/10
Total: 19/20

By far the best blurb out of my entries. Your blurb is exciting, definitely reveals enough of the plot to get you interested, and leaves you with questions like all good blurbs should. The only thing I can comment on is the fact that it's a bit lengthy, and some readers don't have the attention span to read a long blurb (including myself occasionally)

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'Autumn Prince' by FCCleary

Hook: 9/10
Relevancy: 6/10
Total: 15/20

Though your blurb doesn't quite offer (in my opinion) enough about the plot, your phrasing skills definitely work this one to the top in the aspect that it's extremely interesting, and let's readers know they're in for a very mysterious treat!

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'Homosexually Straight' by sarcastic-mess