THE LEAL MINI-AWARDS - Fall Edition [Closed]

└> RESULTS || Best Book Trailer

A very big thanks to all who participated and judged in this contest! Without you, this awards wouldn't have come this far!

Be sure to respect the judge's opinion. If you have any personal objections, gently query them if you need to know how else your book can be improved!

Since this awards is intended for self-improvement and also promotion, do read the reviews of the other fellow authors and give their books a read when you find them interested! :)

Now without further ado, let's get on with the results!

JUDGES:
AmoreLibrorum

 'Amanita: Poison Shot' by marsaumell

Imagery: 8/10
Choice of soundtrack: 4/10
Relevant to the genre: 4/5
Hook/Interest: 8/10
Creativity: 3/5
Addition of special effects: 3/5
Personal enjoyment: 2/5
TOTAL- 32/50

Try reducing the use of that spiral shaped blue thingy. And when you write "blow up" add an exclamation mark, a bomb sound effect and the building collapsing scene there. Also try to change the font. It's VERY simple and doesn't match the genre... I suggest Playfair display SC.

The music doesn't match the genre... your book is sci-fi, set in a dystopian world from what I concluded from the trailer, and the music is very... cheery. Try searching for free stock music for sci-fi... I'm sure you'll find something.

No special effects were added but I'm marking you on the fonts and the transition/animation etc.

Could've been made a little more interesting.

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'The Boy Next Door' by AkshitaaN

Imagery: 7/10
Choice of soundtrack: 8/10
Relevant to the genre: 4/5
Hook/Interest: 7/10
Creativity: 4/5
Addition of special effects: 4/5
Personal enjoyment: 3/5
TOTAL: 37/50