THE LEAL MINI-AWARDS - Fall Edition [Closed]

└> RESULTS || Best Ending Chapter

A very big thanks to all who participated and judged in this contest! Without you, this awards wouldn't have come this far!

Be sure to respect the judge's opinion. If you have any personal objections, gently query them if you need to know how else your book can be improved!

Since this awards is intended for self-improvement and also promotion, do read the reviews of the other fellow authors and give their books a read when you find them interested! :)

Now without further ado, let's get on with the results!

JUDGES:

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'Parlor Tricks' by 0liviaRose436

Relevant Impact 9/10
Personal Enjoyment 8/10
Grammar and Punctuation 5/5
TOTAL: 22/25

Though it was short, oddly, I straight away caught onto some of the plot and was quickly enticed to the scene of urgency before the great confrontation. I loved your writing style and the way you've delicately added those little details because less is more. Although I wasn't expecting the ending, it was an applaudable one as I commented.

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'More to Family' by DrizzleTheWolf

Relevant Impact 7/10
Personal Enjoyment 7/10
Grammar and Punctuation 4/5
TOTAL: 18/25

I didn't get much of what had taken place throughout the storyline. Personally, writing an epilogue is basically a conclusion, what you have written is sweet and I can definitely see a clear image of the scene of my head, but you could try adding in some extra details. Like if there was a war they had survived, you could have the MC thinking back on it, or whatever life event that had an impact on them. You definitely have the room to add details to really make that epilogue really stand out.