Warriors OC Rater

🌿Ripplingivy🌿

Name: Ripplingivy

Okay! Great name! 

Gender: Male

Ok! 

Sexuality: Polyamorous bisexual

Good!

Past and future names: Ripplingkit, Ripplingpaw

Right!

Name meaning: He has rippling like markings and ivy wrapped on his legs

Cool! 5/5

Age(in moons): 56 moons 

Good, not too young, not too old!

Clan: RiverClan

Good!

Rank: Warrior

Okay!

Appearance: blue-gray tom with swirling blue markings, gray streaks, curled ears, and icy blue eyes

Good, it's unique! 10/10

Scent: like ivy & mist

Makes sense, since he has ivy wrapped on his legs. 5/5

Personality: he loves everyone, including his enemies. he wishes to change the code, however, by starting his own religion: rippling animal spirits protectors. he wishes to start his own clan dedicating to the worship of nature instead of their ancestors.

It's a good personality, but I believe it should have some negative traits to balance the positive and the negative parts of the personality. It's very unique though! 10/15

Likes: trout, peace, organization, helping others

Cool, 10/10

Dislikes: chaos, confrontations

Good, 10/10

Family: 

mates - sunflowerrise [she], thrushhaven [tom], ashensong [she]

kits - sunflowerrise [ 3 - expecting ], ashensong [ 2 - expecting ]

Okay, maybe add his parents, siblings, or other family? 10/15

Friends:  sneezesheep

Cool name! Though is this cat Ripplingivy's only friend? 5/5

Enemies: nightstar

Oo, he's enemies with a leader! 5/5

Backstory(birth~): ripplingivy has been planning on a new religion since he was an early apprentice. as many clans were attacking each other for their ancestors, he decided he wanted an end to it. he first discussed this to his kithood friend, sneezesheep, later in their apprenticeship. his friend agreed and supported the religion. he then fell in love with three cats, whom decided to become a polyamorous relationship. they, too, support his religion, but the leader of riverclan, nightstar, is not. ripplingivy is often restricted and on constant supervision. however, for nightstar, it backfires on him when the cats begin a rebellion.

This is a very eye-catching backstory! Maybe add some detail about how he fell in love, or how his mates felt about a polyamorous relationship, or why Nightstar disagreed? It needs a little more detail. 15/20

85/100

Overall, Ripplingivy is a very unique and a great cat! I'd like it if there was just a little more detail and something other than starting a religion in his life. Of course, these are just one person's opinions, so you can ignore these.