Name: Radiantkit-Radinatsky-Radiantstar
Gender: She
Sexuality: Straight
Name meaning: She was named by her mom Radiantkit because of the star mark she has on her forehead since she was born
Cool, 5/5
Age: 25 moons
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Kit - apprentice - warrior - queen - warrior - deputy - Clan leader - queen - leader
Appearance: Light grey fur with white marks on her ear and tail tips, a white star mark on her forehead, light sky blue eyes
I'm not sure if this is possible, because a white star mark is a hard trait to exist. Other than that, her appearance seems possible! 15/20
Scent: She smells like flowers, fresh grass and dandelions
Makes sense since she's ThunderClan 5/5
Personality: She's Loyal to her friends and family, She's very caring, kind, brave, curious, honest, friendly, smart, creative, Cooperative, Forgiving, gets too often emotional, has an anger and hate when it comes about to her dad, sometimes very defensive, very forgetful, most time pessimistic, self-doubting
She has a great personality! 19/20
Likes: go on walks, talk with her friends family, the snow, little kits, the medicine den, the elders scent, she rlly like flowers and other plants
Cool, 5/5
Dislikes: Disputes, fights that are for nothing, hate, sickness, her father, mud
Okay, 5/5
Family: Brambleflower (her mom), Stormclaw (her dad), Amberpaw(her lil brother > same litter with Leopardpaw), Leopardpaw (her lil sis), Mintpaw (her lil sis), Sharpkit (her lil brother)
Wow, her family's big...5/5
Friends: Foxtuft, Roseleaf, Lionfire, Thundercloud, Flowerpelt, Blacklark,
Foxtuft: is a middle big Tom cat with Orange fur pallet a few white markings and green eyes, he has middle long fur
Roseleaf: A brown-white female cat with white and brown spots and with honey yellow eyes and long curly fur
Lionfire: has a dark yellow color pallete fur with thin tail and amber eyes has short fur but around the neck it's very fluffy and long.
Thundercloud: A black tabby cat with yellow eyes and long fur
Flowerpelt: A cream color fur pallete with brown eyes and middle long fur, she also has yellow flower petal in her fur (she's the medicine cat in the clan)
Blacklark: A black cat tom with aqua eyes, middle long fur, has half of face ripped because of a bear trap he once fell when he was a kit
Cool, 5/5
Backstory: She was born with another kit in the litter but the other kit died, she was born with a star sign on her forehead. The medicine cat Jaysong was just surprised while Flowerpaw (now Flowerpelt) had nightmares since she assisted by the kitting of Brambleflower. Flowerpaw told her mentor Jaysong about the dreams and he told her that only her could understand the meaning behind that dreams. Since the day Radiantkit was born were born 4 other kits > Foxkit , Rosekit, Lionkit and Blackkit , (Foxkit is siblings with Rosekit). But Radiantkit had unfortunately very strict parents,so he couldn't play every time with her friends. As she became a apprentice she trained very hard.But one day she fell in love as apprentice with a young warrior named Acornscar, Acornscar became a warrior not so long after Radiantpaw became an apprentice.But Radinatpaw had other problems too.She became not so long after a medicine cat apprentice. But since then she got so much strange dreams that she couldn't sleep at night, she also had huge problems remembering the plants she had to learn. So she gave up on being a medicine cat. But one day a rogue came in the Clan and asked for joining. Poppystar (the leader) was suspicious about that while Ravenfeather (deputy) thought it would be a good idea since they were so less cats. After they both talked about that, even more rogues came to ask for help or joining, Toms, wounded cats, queens, queens with kits, all the cats together looked like another Clan. Poppystar let them rest in the Clan only because Ravenfeather confinced her. But that night Radiantpaw dreamed about the past of the Clan, she was herself another cat! She dreamed about a group of cats called 'The colony' and how they were fighting a huge animals. Not Foxes, not badger, not dogs or humans. It was a strange looking animal, but Radinatpaw could see more than that, she herself was fighting it to save the other cats, even she didn't knew why. She woke once up and thought about telling it Flowerpelt (her old medicine mentor). She told her about the dreams next day, and Flowerpelt said that it could be a sign or had a connection with the rogues that just arrived...
Wait where's the rest of the story? Is it unmade? Well, anyways, if I rate it until this part, then I think this is a great backstory! The plot is good, and it's interesting to read. But it needs a little more detail. 18/20
Mate: Acornscar
Kits:
First litter: Dovefeather, Swallowswing, Chickadeeheart, Sparrowcall, Nightbreeze and Lakethorn
Second litter: Silentkit, Owlkit and Saffronkit
Woah that's a lot...I do think she is a little too young to have kits and become leader, because when she became warrior, she would have been 12 moons. And judging that her first litter is all warriors, she would have to be at least 26 moons old(because a cat can be pregnant for 2 moons), and if she had her second litter, she'd have to be 28 moons old. So yeah, basically, she's a little too young. 4/10
86/100
Overall, Radaintstar is a unique and cool cat! She is definitely unique and distinctive. Some things were that there's very little chance for there to be a star on a cat's forehead naturally, and also, she is pretty young to have two litters and to have become leader. However, these are just one person's opinions so they don't matter.
