OUR LITTLE SECRET-RECREATING SHIVI (FF)

PART 9: HOW TO MANOFY BHABHI

hey guys.....as I told that one more part is familicious, so here it is......happy reading evaryone.....

After sometime, janardan enters pandya niwas yelling 'rishita......' making everyone alert. 'rishita....ghar chal' angrily says janardan making rishita moving closer to dev. 'tune suan nhi maine kya kaha? Chal ghar' yells again as janardan moves towards her but gautum stands in b/w and says 'voh apne ghar par hi hai......shaadi ho chuki hai uski...usse apna aashirwaad dijiye aur iss shadi ko sampan kijiye'. This made janardan more angry and says 'aeee hatt......nhi manta main iss shaadi ko .........(to rishita)aur tu abhi bhi vahin khadi hai......maine kaha chal ghar'. Janardan goes to rishita and pulls her away but dev frees hehand from janardan's grip saying 'biwi hai meri' and pushes him. janardan agrily looks at dev and tries to go tohim again but shiva, gautum and krish stand in b/w. dev too stands next tothem. 'iska anjaam bahut bura hoga.....bahut bura.....' threatens janardan. Shiva rolls his sleeves and says'aa na.....abhi bta de kya bura hoga?'.'oho gussa aa gaya.....main jaanta hu ki rishita ko bhagne me tune aur teri iss laila(pointing towards raavi) ne madad ki hai..... shiva tu apna aur iska thoda jayada dhyaan rakh.....' says janardan provoking shiva. 'janradan.....' shouts shiva as he moves towards janardan. But gautum stops him saying 'nhi shiva.....rishtedaar hain humare aur rishtedaaro ke beech maan-samaan hona chahiye, apmaan nhi.....' . 'bilkul gahi kaha gautum tune......' retorts janardan. 'aree khade kya ho....naye naye rishtedaar bane hai......zara ache se khaatir daari karo..' says janardan indicating his goons. But, before both the parties could land in an ugly fight, rishita shouts'koi aage nhi badega' comes b/w them. 'ye aap kya kar rhe ho papa......mere sasuraal wale hai ye....' says rishita sternly shocking everyone. 'aur ye shaadi maine apni marji se ki hai aur bhaagi bhi main khud hu.....kisine ne meri help nhi ki hai........aur hn......agr aapne kuch bhi galt karne ki koshish kin a toh aapko bahut mehnga padega'says rishita making janardan look her in disblief. Rishita continues saying 'hn papa...main apna age proof aur letter police station chodte hue aayi hu......usme likha hai ki ye shaadi main apni marji se kar rahi hu aur mere sasuraal wao ko aapse khatra hai......aapka ek galt kadam aapki reputation aur bua ke political career par bahut bhaari pad sakta hai....'.whole family looks rishita shockingly whereas rishita looks at shivi who gives an assuring smile.

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After lunch, all starts leaving for home but suddenly shiva asks 'bhabhi aap apne saath apne official documents leke aayi ho....?'. Rishita nods her head in yes and says 'hn par tum kyun puch rahe ho?....' . 'bhabhi aapko apna age proof police station me submit karna hoga taaki aap khudko balik(adult) proof kar sako aur aapke papa iss shaadi ko illegal na bol paye' replies shiva. Raavi too says 'hn rishita....isse pandya pariwaar legally protected rahe ga.....aur saath me ek letter bhi police station me drop karna jisme ye likha ho ki pandyas ko tumhare papa se khatra hai'. rishita looksat them with hesitation. 'rishita tension mat lo...ye sirf mere family ki protection ke liye hai.....you know na ki tumhare papa kuch bhi kar sakte hai......please' says dev. rishita agreesreluctantly to this.

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Rishita turns to her father and says 'sorry papa....par main apne sasural walo ko khatre me nhi daal sakti....'.janardan looks all angrily and says 'meri beti ko mujhse alag karke tum logo ne bahut badi galti ki hai.....bahut badi galti hisab toh hoga.....barabar hoga.....yaad rakhna....aur tu shiva....' giving be-more-careful look to shiva. Shiva too gives a look full of rage. Janardan leaves angrily. Rishita gets emotionalseeing him leave. 'dekho na dev papa bina ashirwaad diye chale gaye' says rishita crying. Dev tries to console her saying 'don't worry rishita...vo ek na ekdin zarror man jayenge...hmm'. 'aee haalo(chalo)....bahut tamasha ho gya...ab shaadi kar hi li toh......aee dhara shaadi ke baad ki jaroori rashme kara de...thik che....main chali apne kamre me' sayssuman and starts moving towards her room. Rishita goes and stands in front ofher saying 'maa aasirwaad nhi doge'.Suman sighs and indicate them to do so. They take blessing and suman goes toher room. Dev and rishita goes to dhara and take blessing. 'bhabhi, please maaf kardo hume' pleads dev. but dhara being annoyed by all four (shivi and dev-rishita) says 'kya fark padta hai.....tum log toh vahi karoge jo tumhe sahi lagta.....meri baat kaun suna chahega.... na tum dono (looking at dev-rishita)...natum dono(looking at shivi)'. Saying this, she leaves for preparation of rashms. All four knew that they need to pacify their Bhabhi but how.

SCENE: same day; night; kitchen of pandya niwas

Shiva peeps inside the kitchen and finds dhara and raavi preparing dinner. Raavi notices him. shivagestures asking 'bhabhi ka mood kaisa hai...?' asks shiva to raavi replies nodding her head in no. Now dev-rishita also arrives to pacify dhara. All three again peep inside the kitchen again.This time dhara observes them but ignores.'kaun jayega andar manane?...' asks dev innocently turns his gaze to shiva.shiva reaction 😲. Shiva nods his head in no and rest two nod in yes. They push shiva inside. Dhara looks at him and ignores. shiva scratches his head not knowing how to pacify his dhara Bhabhi. 'bhabhi jaldi gussa toh nhi hoti lekin jab hoti hai na toh manane me naani yaad aati hai....' thinks shiva.Shiva sees raavi working silently. He gets an idea. 'aee maami ki behn ki beti......tu yahan kya kar rhi hai ab tak......' says shiva in his rowdy manner. Raavi frowns at him but after a second realizes whathe is trying to do. 'mujhe laga tha kitu sirf akal se andha hai par aaj pata chala ki tu ankho se bhi andha hai......dikh nhi rha kya main kya kar rhi hu.......' retorts raavi chuckling. Shiva goes near her and holds her wrist saying'aee....jayada shaani mat ban samjhi.....chal nikal yahan se, chal'. 'dhara di dekho na.....ye mujhe kaise ghar se nikal rha hai *fake cries*' says raavi dramatically as she always does. But there was no response from dhara. This made shivi sadder. 'bhabhi mujhse itnanaaraaj hai ki ab mujhe rok bhi nhi rhi......' whishpers shiva sadly. Raavi hears it and looks at him. her heart aches for shiva. She knew what dhara and shiva meant to each other and shiva can't bear this indifference from her. 'dhara di maante hai galti hui hai.......uske liye aap daat lo, maar lo....par aise baat karna band mat karo...please..' says raavi emotionally. But dhara being still angry says 'main kaun hoti hu tumhe kuch kehne wali, tum log bade ho gye ho.....ab tumhe meri salha ki koi jaroorat nhi hai.....ab shiva tujhe ghr se nikale.......gussa kare main kuch nhi bolungi....lado jitna ladna hai...' without even seeing shivi. Raavi goes to her and pleads 'please dhara di, please........aap ye chup reh kar hume aise saja mat do please......'. But dhara remains silent continuing her work.

(positions: dhara and raavi near the shelves beside the door of kitchen facing towards the shelves. Bothare showing their back to shiva. Shiva is standing near the counter)

Finally, shiva asks emotionally 'matlab Bhabhi aap humse baat nhi karoge?......na hume gussa karoge aur na saja doge?'. dhara keeps mum. Shiva takes silence in yes. after a complete silence of few seconds, shiva says 'toh phir thik hai.......'. raavi frowns at this. She looks at him and she gets shocked.

so here I end this part.......guys do tell if I am going off track or if you are not liking it......I will try to improve.......next part is a recreate scene.....hope you'll love that.......