Entry 5

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CHARACTERS:

PREETA Arora
KARAN Luthra
ARYAN Mehra
SHREYA Jain
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Preeran nd aryan were kniwing each other from college time preeran use to love eachother madly as preeta was an orphan karans family didnt liked her and thought she was just for his money and didnt accept her but karan went against his family and decided to marry her after getting settled and shreya was karan's childhood friend she secretly loved karan but for studing she went to U.S.A and would be coming back to india and will be confessing her love where as karan finally decided to propose preeta to marry him and on the other side preeta came to know she is suffering from a heart diseas and the only time left with her is 4 weeks if heart not transplanted than she will not be able to survive but knowing how much karan loves him she decided to make him hate herself so that even after a month she dies he doesnt get himself drowned in sorrow and ruine himself so when he called her in a garden to propose her she with the help of aryan as per the plan said no in a mocking tone ki she dont love him and was just using him for money and setting up aryans bussiness and she love aryan not him and left

story beginss**

preeta was sitting in her room with a gloomy and teary face seeing her and karans photo and then only a boy came revealed to be aryan

aryan: pree mat kar aisa mein keh raha hoc hum dhund lenge donor ko bata sach isse woh tut chuka hai 10/18

preeta: jaanti hoon aryan par yeh takleef kuch pal ki hi hogi phir mujhe ek dhokebaaz samaj kar woh bhul jaaayega kisi achi ladki k sath ek nayi zindagi shuru karega khush rahega lekin agar yeh jaan gaya ki maine use dhoka nahi diya hai aur phir main use chhod kar chalegai na toh woh bajjarbattu devdas banjaayega jo mujhe marne k baad bhi shanti nahi degi aryan i cant see him like that

Screen shift to luthra house in a room where a boy is shown seeing a pic of his and a girl
boy: kyun, kyun kiya aisa preeta kya kami thi mere pyaar mein jo tumne aisa kiya maine toh apne parivaar k khilaaf bhi jaakarke tumhaara sath diya kyu kiya aisa kyuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!! C⠀⠀OTO (so the boy is revealed to be karan luthra)

karan : bas lekin abb mein tumhe dikha

dunga ki tumhaare is so called dhoke ke

baad bhi main nahi tuta tumhe kya laga tum

kuch bhi bologi aur main maan lunga no i find

out the reason behind your so called dhoka

saying this he went down towards his family member and saw a beautifu girl was shown sitting and talking revealed to be shreya she directly went to karan and hugged him tightly then dragged him toward the centre of hall and went down on the knees in front of him he looked at her shocked

shreya: karuu i know u since childhood and trust me u were alwayzz very special for me and i love you the most u are my life will you marry me? saying so she looked at him with hopefull eyes karan was about to say no but then only his mother came hold his hand and said yes he looked at her shocked he without saying anything just hold her hand and took her to his room

karan: shreya dekh i know tu mujhse pyaar karti bai but i dont love you i love someone else but i dont y when i proposed her she rejected saying she love someone else

shreya: ohh means she dont love you then y are u not accepting me and move on ??

karan: nahi shreya agar sach hota toh i would have but yeh sach bhi toh nahi hai i know she is lying but y that only i need to find out

shreya: matlab ?? will you explain properly then karan told her from starting how they met, about their bond and then what happened on tht day after listening it shreya felt that there is something preeta is hiding so she asked karan to accept the marriage and let her know about shreka's (shreya+karan) marriage and then will see the reaction listening it karan agreed to marriage and asked to keep it the very next date available on preeta's side

she was talking to aryan and then only a ting in her phone indicating her about the a msg was herd she checked her phone only to see karans msg she looked at aryan who singnaled her to check

k-msg : i want to meet u ms.preeta arora p-reply: but i dont wanna meet u k-msg: you'll have to coz i have a very good news for u meet me at city cliff sharp 9pm good bye

as decided she met him

karan: so finally you here tumhe kya laga agar tum mujhe dokha dogi toh main tut jaaunga but u know what i hate you and yes aaj tumhe main yaha invite karne aaya hoon apni engagement main and ya i want you to meet my fiance my childhood friend Ms. Shreya jain or i should say soon to be mrs.Shreya Luthra

hearing him she was broken but happy thinking he was trying to move on with tears in her eyes she said

preeta : accha hai na mera pichha chhuta congrats for you wedd...wedding but i am not gonna come woh kya hai main bhi apn..apne py...pya....pyaar k sath bahr jaarahi hoon you know s..some qual...quality time spend karne and yes plzzz do not call me again saying this not able to control her tears she ran to her car where aryan was waiting for her reaching there she burst out crying and hugged him

on karan's side

as soon as she left he also let the tears flow from his eyes shreya kept her ha shoulder 14/18 う

karan(chuckled) dekha saaf dikhrahe the aasu uske aakhon mein par nahi (tearfully) kyu kar rahi hai woh aisa shreya: dont worry we will find it out sooon chal filhal ghar chal. Saying this they went from there

On preeta's side aryan: jab itni taklif ho rahi hai toh bol

kyu nahi deti usko sach rokle

preeta: nahi main uski zindagi apne problems ki wajah se barbaad nahi karsakti meri saaari mushkile mere sath hi chalejaayegi lekin haa ek kaam karna hai jiss ladki ke sath woh shaadi kar raha hai mujhe uske baare mein janna hai i dont want ke karan kisi galat ladki k sath shaadi kare isiliye just get me her info shreya jain naam hai

after some days almost( 2 weeks later)in this week she collected info about shreya and got to know that she is his childhood bf and will not hurt him so she backed off her health started deteriorating coz only 1 week was

left for her now AFTER 5 DAYS

it was karan and shreya's engagement and preetas last day in afternoon karan went to hospital with shreya as she got an emergency case he was waiting for shreya when he saw aryan near a bench looking extremely vulnarable he went towards him put his hand on his shoulder aryan turned and looked at karan who was seeing him with confusion karan : aryan tu yaha kya kar raha hai ??

aryan couldn't hold himself back and just hugged him bursting out in tears and said him the most heart wrecking news aryan: she.....she is dy..dy..DYING...

listing him his heartdropped he anyhow composed himself and asked fearfully karan: kaun???

aryan: prr.preeta

listing this ground beneath his feet slipped his body felt numb he directly fell on his knees but aryan hugged him tightly and bring him back

karan: kaha hai woh

aryan pointed towards the icu he ran to that room and saw his lifeline his love lying there lifeless with pale face he ran inside and just hug her tightly and started crying like a baby she stir open her eyes to see him hugging and crying she put her hands attached with wires on his head and whispered with teary eyes. wires on his head and whispered with teary

eyes

preeta : karan,

karan looked at her and said karan,: kyu kiya aisa kyu nahi bataya itna vishwas nahi tha k main kuch bhi karunga lekin tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga itna bhi vishwas nahi tha mujhpe or i was never that capa....

preeta: shhh aisi baat nahi par mujhe pata hai ki agar mujhe kuch hojaata toh mera bajjarbattu apne aap ko devdaas part 2 banaleta isiliye socha apne liye tumhaare dil mein nafrat bhardu k tumhe koi taqleef na ho mere jaane k baad bhi tumhe koi taqleef na ho mere paas waise bhi waqt nahi hai and here she started breathing heavily

seeingbher karan got panicked karan: pree....preeta kya hua ruko main abhi doc ko bulata hoon

preeta: hushhh me...mein ab nahi bach sakti

i...i dont have time i am sorry but promise ill

come back..... i'll come bac and hum tab apni iss adhuri kahani ko ura zaroor karenge i.....i..lov..love..... you hhhh........ karan: preeta hey... babydoll i love you 2 baby listen na preetaaa....ahhhh
Preetaaaah

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