Ash x Eiji classmates

1. America

AU// this is literally my first fanfiction ever and my first time writing fiction in English (my first language is French) so if anyone ever reads this please tell me what I can do better whatever it is.

⚠️Tw: i was thinking of making Eiji struggle with Sh for like most of the story so if this is something triggering for you I just wanna let you know. I'll put TW when it's like bad but there will be mention of it through the whole book. I'll also write about r@pe and PTSD so keep that in mind and read safe :)

Eiji POV:

I felt the itch on my forearms grow back as I was swinging my arms by my side, the shovel was heavy and my fast and big moves were slowly opening the small cuts under my winter coat. I discreetly looked behind me as I got more and more dizzy from the effort and the lack of food in my half asleep body, Ibe-san was almost done getting all the snow off his car and I had shovelled his driveway just enough for him to back up safely. With a sigh I threw my shovel on the huge pile of snow and sat down on the cold cement, my pants becoming damp and freezing. I could feel ibe-san's worried look on my back but I simply took my cellphone and started taking pictures. I wanted to show my sister all the snow we were getting in America. Back in Japan we sometimes had snow days but never a big storm like this one, the fluffy white powder was almost at my waistline when i got outside this morning. I snapped a few pics but all the whiteness just mixed together and we couldn't even distinguish the sidewalk from the houses. I gently put my phone back in my coat as I got up to say good bye to Ibe-san

Time skip

I could hear his car starting and the motor noise slowly fading away as Ibe-san left for work like every day, I got to my room and changed into some dry clothes, thinking about the day ahead of me. I had nothing to do, since I got to New York I hadn't gotten a job or even started school, I knew Ibe-san was okay with it since he was the one who offered to welcome me here at the start of this summer. My parents were so worried about me since I had stopped pole volting, I wasn't eating, I had stopped talking to the few friends I had and even getting out of bed to shower felt like a chore. I started chuckling to myselft; I don't know how being depressed in America can be better than being depressed in japan... I was trying hard to chase away that thought telling me they just wanted to get rid of me, maybe sending me across the globe was the only way for them to be at peace. Anyway.
I suddenly realized I had been sitting in front of my mirror talking to myself for all that time, I got up and took a look at my watch now showing 13:15 pm, I went down the stairs leading to the kitchen and got myself some instant ramen.

Time skip

Once I was done eating (and by eating I mean taking 3 bites while trying not to spew) I got rid of the left over noodles and went to sit in front of my screen to check once again all the information about my new college. After spending all of summer and fall sitting around and doing nothing I had decided I might as well try to go to an American school, if I was planning to stay here longer it was a good idea. My first real class was a week from now, I had got into some basic psychology program I had no real interest in... hopefully I would have some cool teachers and might even make a friend or two, I wasn't too hopeful for that part since I literally sucked at meeting people. It's not that I don't want to talk to people it's just that I'm so much comfortable by myself with my music. But this time I'll make an effort.

16:00
Now reassured about my new school I closed my computer and got back to my room, laying on my bed with the familiar feeling of emptiness deep inside my stomach and crawling up to my lungs. I fell asleep listening to my deep breathing.

//ok so I feel like this kinda suck cause I had to go back and forth from google traduction to wattpad and like I'm repeating words and all and the story is really boring right now but next chapter Eiji goes to school and it will get interesting :))
Tell me what you would like to read in my story and what I can improve <3