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~ From Pup To Alpha: A wolf's tale by @TheWordArtistBooks ~

Book title: From Pup To Alpha: A wolf's tale

Author: TheWordArtistBooks

Reviewer : _wordmist_addict_

1. Title

The title is a little bit long. It's not a common title so that's a plus point but then also, long titles should be avoided. But these things aside, the title conveys the theme of the story and tells the reader about the main story line of the book. So it is very much relevant and fitting. 

2. Cover

The color pallet used is good, but you can try modifying the cover sometime later. A little bit of unique touch to the simple photo of a wolf howling - can do wonders. The alignment and symmetry of the font is not that good, you can trying changing it to something more symmetrical -but try to keep the current color pallet as it suits the story and is quite great.

3. Blurb

The blurb is good, it is really appealing for the supernatural book lovers. I admire the way you introduced the main protagonist and the story behind his name. It hooks the readers and compels them to surely give your book a try. You can try adding an excerpt from the book to give the readers a peek into your book.

4. Aesthetics/ banners/ covers/playlists used in the chapters

No such things are used which makes the story lack the visual appeal, try to add it in order to attract more readers.

5. First impression ( made from the first few paragraphs, blurb, cover and title)

The first impression  is good, with the blurb title and cover. I think the readers will be willing to give your story a try. But they might get a little disappointed after reading the first chapter because the narration isn't that elaborate. you should modify this.

6. First chapter (after the prologue)

The first chapter is written smoothly but lacks description. You need to set the background and the situation where the scene is taking place. You can't jump upon the dialogues without letting the readers know where the characters are and what are they talking about. Reading might get confused in the initial part of the story so I highly recommend you to write a new opening to the chapter. First chapters are important and so is it's opening. Work on this. 

7. Characters development

The character development isn't evident much but I am sure it will develop by the end of the book because it takes time to actually make the character develop. So take your time and ponder upon the characters.

8. Plotline

The plotline is unique but still the story needs better narration and direction. You have the outline prepared but you need to learn how to elaborate on the scenes and characters to make it look real, and ensure that characters don't appear as hollow.

9. Grammar

I really liked your almost errorless grammar usage. Good vocabulary is used which showcases your potential. Good work!

Instead of using words like mum and dad, trying being professional by using mother and father. It is okay if you use it in dialogues like 'Mum told me to do this' but for writing the narration of the thoughts of the protagonist use - I was told by my mother to do this. This will enhance your writing.  

10. Word count of chapters/ number of chapters

The word count fluctuates but then also, it is fine as long as it isn't dragged or shortened. Your chapters are around 1k - 2k which is fair enough for wattpad. But ensure that you use the word count given wisely, don't play around too much. And don't fluctuate, fix yourself with a certain word count.

11. Writing style and flow of the book

The writing style is good, but needs to be elaborate. It needs detailing and pace setting. Don't start from anywhere and everywhere. Tell the readers patiently what is going and let them imagine your writing by using imaginary in your writing.

12. Interaction and socialization with readers

You have put in the author's note as some place, so socialization is there. You need to bold the author's note to keep it separated from the chapter you are writing. Also when you are explaining some words like 'Patrick' which was used in a chapter, then do so in the author's note only. Keep is highlighted too. Don't mix the author's note and other notes with the story. 

13. Hook/ overall enjoyment

The overall enjoyment is there to some extent and this is a good book for quick reads. Hook is missing. Try to end chapters on a strong note, avoid vague ending which put off the readers.

14. Constructive criticism

Use elaboration, it is missing. Hook is missing. Needs more background details and information.

15. Suggestions

Try to include cliffhangers, add author's note in separate font, work on elaborating the narration. The latter chapters improve a lot, so try to edit out and modify the initial chapters a little.

*Queries :

~How are you connected to the story? In what way?

--> I felt connected but not much. I felt that the characters were lacking layers of personality which makes them look unreal. You need to go deep in the emotional aspect of the characters.

Rating : 5/10

This book will definitely shine with little editing and is a good book for quick reads!