My views as reviews!

~That Family Episode One by @FloydLocke ~

Book title: That Family Episode One

Author: FloydLocke

Reviewer : _wordmist_addict_

1. Title

The title is very very unique even though ironically it is made up of very common words. So the creativity of the author is quite visible in the title itself. The title is very relevant to the book and alluring as it efficiently sums up the gist of the whole book. Good work. 

2. Cover

The cover is very simple yet effective. It conveys the vibes of family drama thing which will certainly catch the eye of the readers interested in this genre. But still, I would say that some more work can be done in making it more eye catching. I really liked the font used as it gives the perfect vibes which are needed. The color pallet is fair enough. 

3. Blurb

The is very well written, and has the professional feel of published books. It is well thought of and looks structured. The flow of the blurb is good and it will definitely catch the readers' attention. So great efforts!

4. Aesthetics/ banners/ covers/playlists used in the chapters

The cast photos used are very good and look great. I really loved it. I think the usage is good as it gives the readers a good preview of how they should picture the characters written by the authors. Smart choice!

5. First impression ( made from the first few paragraphs, blurb, cover and title)

The first impression is quite positive as readers, who are interested in this genre, will definitely pick up this book. I really like the starting of the first chapter as it started in the middle of a situation. The initial paragraphs gradually gives the information about the characters and with each dialogue the readers get to know about the situation more. The background is set by each line as the author has beautifully explained the commotion and chaos going on in the house due o shifting. 

Personally, I admire your choice of names and can really relate to the usual banters of a family.

6. First chapter (after the prologue)

There wasn't any such prologue, but the first chapter successfully set the pace of the story and gave enough information about the settings of the story. The readers don't feel alienated as they can clearly relate and understand the bantering and chaos caused when they shift houses. I liked how you kept the situation very basic, which makes it easy for the readers to believe the story and this makes your book very very realistic. 

The first chapter does good work in introducing us to some of the members of 'That family' that is the Chamber family. The ending of the chapter is quite good and it also promises us a good amount of humor and situational comedy.

7. Characters development

The character development is not that prominent, as the story is progressing. But I am already liking the characters! The way they are written is very realistic. 

8. Plotline

The plotline is not like the other books I have reviewed. Instead of a single plot which continues for the whole book, your book has a situational plotlines wherein a variety of plots are used to hook the readers. So the distinctiveness of your book lies in its ability to engage the readers enough that they flip to the next chapter.

I must say that even though there is no single plotline, a uniformity is maintained as all the plotlines that develop are revolving around the basic family dramas and all. So this why, your book manages to bring out that essence of family after every episode. 

9. Grammar

The grammar used is very good and the vocabulary used is very diverse. This showcases the author's good command on the language. The usage of capital letter is seen in one or two places, where it is unnecessary, so I request you to change it and use either italics or some other font to emphasize on certain things. Capital letter usage is considered quite unprofessional so that is why. 

10. Word count of chapters/ number of chapters

The word count of the chapters is good and doesn't need any changes. It doesn't seem too dragged or slow, it is at a perfect pace. 

11. Writing style and flow of the book

The writing style of the author is flowy and very vivid. The readers can visualize the words that are being presented to them by the author. I really appreciate and applaud your ability to use imaginary that makes the reader actually feel your writing and relate to it. The way your have described situations - be it burning of toast or banters between siblings, be it the nuisances of the chef or the dialogues which make the readers laugh - it is commendable. Good work!

12. Interaction and socialization with readers

I observed that even though you replied to one or two readers, a lot of interaction is still missing. I suggest your to value your readers if you want to make sure that they come back when you update. Work on this. Socialization is quite there, the author's notes really give away your excitement and ensures the readers know that you value them. 

13. Hook/ overall enjoyment

All the chapters are good and hooking. But I personally love the orphanage episode, the humor in that chapter is to a next level. I really enjoyed reading it. I am sure the readers will definitely love this book.

14. Constructive criticism

Even though the  book is written very nicely, I think this is more of a script for a series or something. As much engaging and humorous the dialogues and plot is - the real feel is not up to the mark. This is a perfect script for a tv series but not so much for a book. 

15. Suggestions

I would suggest you to complete this book, and try to share it with some tv producers because I am sure that would definitely earn this book it's right appreciation.

*Queries :

How do I keep people coming back for the next books???--> I would suggest you to end the first book with a cliffhanger if possible and if not then interact with readers to ensure that they become your friends. Look for readers genuinely interested in your genre, and then make sure you don't disappoint them. Join book clubs, this will really help. But overall, I would say - Readers will stick only when you have completed the books. Readers like to read completed books mostly.

Rating : 7/10

I brewing family drama, prepping itself for getting produced as an upcoming hit TV series!