Book title: Today I Remember
Author: bowen_owen
Reviewer : _wordmist_addict_
1. Title
The title of the book is very relevant. It may not appear even the book initially, but the last chapter justifies the title perfectly. I really like the title and it is definitely going to make the readers ponder. Goof work done!
2. Cover
The cover of the book is not very relevant to the book and its theme. I recommend you to work upon it and change it to something that is matching your book's theme and doing justice to your story.
3. Blurb
The blurb is quite short, yet impactful. But even though it is good, readers won't be actually jumping into the story. I suggest you to add some other excerpt, because you haven't actually included your best lines. You can either include the last two lines of the last chapter or some other line which you think is the best in your book. That would create a better and more effective blurb.
4. Aesthetics/ banners/ covers/playlists used in the chapters
No as such things are used but I don't think that it is needed too. The book is a masterpiece without it too.
5. First impression ( made from the first few paragraphs, blurb, cover and title)
The first impression, for me personally, was not that good. I wasn't very convinced to read your book in the first glance. And this isn't because you book isn't good, it is damn good, but the blurb and cover fail to stand out and appeal to the readers. I suggest you to improvise these things so that readers get attracted enough to see how talented you are!
6. First chapter
The first chapter is really good and sets the mood for the rest of the storyline of the letter. The readers will actually be content with your writing as they would definitely relate to the topic of young love and all. The readers will be hooked from the very first line of the book as they start to wonder what made the protagonist think of this 'someone special.' They will definitely feel what you are writing because I did too!
This idea of letter as a book is very new and unused so that will certainly make the readers read the book till the end.
7. Characters development
The character development of the protagonist of the book is very well seen. The protagonist started from being an immature girl/boy who started having feelings for someone who didn't seem to reciprocate their feelings. And this character then finally ended with understanding their own importance and learning to let go off things and people who don't care for him/him. So a positive character development is evident which may serve as a guide for other readers who are going through the same situation. It has a relatable protagonist with which we as readers begin to feel and relate to the happenings.
8. Plotline
Even though your book isn't actually a story or novel, it still manages to throw a perfect masterpiece at the readers. We can actually see the progress of this one sided love story which deals with the phases of the protagonist's life which includes both ups and down. Sometimes he/she is happy, sometimes he/she is sad. This dynamic cycle and confusion of thoughts mixed with the relatable thoughts bring out the story of this book very beautifully. Good work!
9. Grammar
The grammar seems spotless with a very good use of vocabulary. With the word good, I don't mean usage of big and heavy words - I mean the use of apt and effective words. You use simple words which bring out the emotions very smoothly out of the characters and this is a very good talent.
The combination of present and past tense is seen in the chapters which also enhances your writing and makes it much more appealing and enjoyable for the readers.
10. Word count of chapters/ number of chapters
I am not recommending any specific word count as this is a unique way of writing a book that I have seen. I think the chapters are of perfect length as per the theme.
11. Writing style and flow of the book
The writing style is commendable and worth noticing. I was in awe with your talent to make the readers feel your words. The words your wrote, the way you wrote, and the way you narrated it was just great! I think you have great potential for writing novels also because your writing is very very effective. Good luck for future works!
The flow of the book is very smooth and gradual. You can distinctly see the phases of the love story as a reader and admire it.
12. Interaction and socialization with readers
Interaction with readers is very well there. You have replied to the comments and this shows your good attitude towards them. Socialization is missing but it isn't really needed. Your writing socializes with your readers without the author's notes too.
13. Hook/ overall enjoyment
The overall enjoyment is omnipresent and never ceasing, with the hook present too. Readers are compelled to read this innocent love story which is surely relatable and worth giving a shot!
14. Constructive criticism
I think you really need to change the blurb and cover.
15. Suggestions
Just write freely and the way you write now and dang! We have the new author sitting here!
*Queries :
~Was it enjoyable?--> Without a doubt - it was definitely enjoyable! I personally loved it !
Rating : 9/10
With the innocence of this story narrated through letters, this is surely going to pull the strings of your heart!
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