hi, I'm really struggling to come up with ideas for this story. so if anyone has any they would be greatly welcoming.
also i wanted to know if when they get to the desert do you want chani. because i have written a couple of future chapters and i feel they are a bit odd as chani just being a friend, because she is you know the main love interest.
please comment or message me your ideas.
finally i do not tolerate hate or discrimination. i had to delete one if my previous books because of all the trans-phobic hate. just don't comment it on this one please. i am a trans-boy. and that's that.
thanks
Duncan.
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Brute Force ]|[ Paul Atreides
Adventureset in dune 2021. paul is arranged into a relationship with a girl, as she was picked out by bene gesserit as they were disappointed by jessica for her having a son rather than the wanted daughter. a girl brought into boys arm scared and alone. a...