HER IDENTITY Chapter One

Episode 39

Welcome back

Devgarh fort

Kabir : Is liye main usse rok raha tha ... Use jo karna tha yahan reh kar bhi ho sakta tha ... Lekin nahi madam ko sab kuch khudse karna hai .... 😤

Shreya : Wo choti bachhi nahi hai samhal legi khudko ... Aap tension maat lijiye Kunwar Sa ...

Kabir : Kaise tension na loon Shreya ... Yahan Ragini ko doubt hone laga hai ... Use Riddhima , Aliya ya Rith kisi ke bare mein nahi pata . Aur ye sab is family ke secrets hai... Kaise bata doon use ... Mahi kabhi ye sab nahi chahegi ...

Shreya : Apko apke bahen pe bharosa hai nah ... To ushe hi decide karne dijiye Riddhima, Aliya, Rith ko kaise handle karna hai ...

Kabir : Tum bol to sahi rahi ho par mera dil keh raha hai wahan kuch to sahi nahi hai ... Upar se Sejal bhi wahi hai ...

Shreya : Kunwar Sa , Mahira hai nah ... Sab samhal legi ...

Kabir : Aur tum .... Mujhe bar bar Kunwar Sa maat bulao ... Call me Kabir ...

Shreya : Are aap ye kya bol rahe hai Kunwar Sa ... Main to sirf mehman hoon ...

Kabir : Mmmm ... Choro Jane do ...

Shreya : Good night 😊 ...

Kabir : Subh ratri ... ☺️

Kabir's pov : Pata nahi kya ho gaya tha mujhe . Shreya ka mujhe Kunwar Sa bulana achha kyun nahi laga . Main hoon Kunwar Sa , mujhe to achha lagna chahiye ... Choro mujhe kya Shreya mujhe kuch bhi bulaye ...

( Hehe maine last episode k Precap padha hi nahi tha, to main clueless ho gayi thi ki kya likhoon 🤭 . Tension ki puri barat aagayi hai life mein , yar aaisa koi scheme nahi hai jisme agar ek life jhand ho chuki ho to use badla jaa sake ... Aaisa kuch agar hota hai to please suggest me, yar aabhi to wo paragliding wale ladke ki tarah zindagi ho gayi hai 😑 . Ye jo log bolte hai na ki college life mast hai wo mujhe kahi mil jaye , murder kar dena hai unka mera ... Or ek baat, jab jo story ke lead mein hogi unko reading space diya jayega . Filhaal Maya is equally important like Riddhima , to unke scenes honge , cover badalta rahega , cover mein jo hogi samjh lena wo lead pe hai , agar natural portrait ho to positive character agar black and white ho to grey .  )

At a Flower shop

Maya : Dekhiye main 1000 dungi ... Maine boldiya to bol diya bass ...

Shopkeeper : Dekhiye 2000 se kam nahi ayega ...

Maya : Ji nahi ... Inha pe sare flowers to maine choose kiye , apki koi mehnat nahi lagi firbhi aap kuch bhi keemat bole jaa rahe ho ...

Shopkeeper : Nahi madam hum 2000 se ek paisa bhi kaam nahi kar sakte ...

: Ye lijiye bhaiya 2000 ...
( And the person ran away with the flowers )

Maya : What the hell ... 😤

Bhaiya ye lijiye 2000 or mujhe ek different bouquet banake dijiye ... Disgusting people ... Pata nahi kahan kahan se aajate hain ye log ... 🙄
( And Maya drove off  )

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Next Day

Maya was heading to her office . Suddenly a car blocked her way . A man came down from the car and knocked Maya's window ...

: Shaadi se bhag ke aayi ho kya ?

: What ... ?

: Shaadi jab karni hi nahi thi to itna natak kyun kiya ... ?

Maya : Excuse me .... 🙁

Maya got down from her car and faced the person ...

Maya : Who the hell are you to poke into my personal life ... ?

: Waise maine itna sab kuch kar diya aur tumne aapni 3 fevorite galiya nahi di ...

Maya : Excuse me .... Ek to tumne meri flowers chori ki upar se ulta sidha bake jaa rahe ho ... or ye 3 galiya .. ye kya hai ...

: Wow ... Maine suna tha log badal jaate hain par itna first time dekh raha hoon ... Tumne jo ye kiya hai nah is se ek nahi 3 3 zindagi barbad kar rahi ho ...

He backed out and left ...

While driving Maya kept on thinking about the last line the guy said to her . Didn't she justiced with their life ... ? No one was wrong except the situation . ( I hope the readers are able to identify the person , i.e. Aditya Hooda , first time I used ie in a sentence, don't know whether it is correct or not . ) On the other hand Aditya , mistook Maya as Zoya , who got married to the man of her father's choice . Aditya , unknowingly hurted with his words  Maya assuming her as Zoya .

I hope my readers can identify Aditya and Zoya , they are from the show Bepanah aired on Colors . After Zoya got married Aditya again vanished , finally after 2 months , his brother Arjun found him being in Amsterdam . Here too he is handling the cockpit . Both Maya and Aditya lost their beloved in a different way, but both holds the same pain , one is already the resident of dark world and another one is making its way , how will this entangled souls become the light of each other ?

How many of you are watching YRKKH ? Though I don't watch the show but one thing I missed in my story which they elaborated so nicely . Wait till the next episode comes 😁 ...

Precap : Blooming feelings between Riansh ....  conspiracy against Riansh ... Kabir's sudden visit to his sisters ...

I know it's short but exams tension you see ... If everything goes well then next chapter will be published next week...