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Name: Hollyheart.

Pretty generic name, Holly and heart, but I guess it's okay. Maybe an explanation?

Nicknames: 'Ly.

How would you even pronounce that?

Gender: She-Cat.

Sexuality: She doesn't have a mate yet, but is keeping her eyes open, so none for the moment.

So, questioning? Because sexuality doesn't mean whether she has a mate or not?

Clan: WindClan.

Oh, so when would this take place in canon? Before or after Firestar (BF or AF XD)

Age: 1 1/2 years or eighteen moons, still pretty young.

Okay, yeah, that's pretty young, but okay. As long as she isn't some super-powered new warrior who is better than the senior warriors.

Family:

Mother―Ravenmist (Pretty, lithe black tuxedo she-cat. Caring, kind, fiercely loyal. Killed by Snowscar at 2 1/2 years old - so she was 30 moons at death. Hollyheart gets her black coat and amber eyes from her.)

Okay. The family appearances check out, but maybe add a little more? How would the killing affect Hollyheart, and also, that's pretty young. When would she have had Hollyheart? Cause I mean, seriously, that's reeeally young.

Father―Fallenwing (Stocky dark gray tom with black paws. Also amber eyes. Yeahh both of her parents look pretty similar but I SWEAR THEY'RE NOT RELATED OR IF SO VERY VERY DISTANTLY!!! Drowned by Mousepelt at 2.75 and a half years, so 33 moons at death. Sympathetic at times but mostly keeps to himself.)

Sweeet home Alabama. I guess it's good that you addressed that they look similar, but also when two black cats with "Bb" genes mate, odds are three to one that their offspring will be black. But, well, all of the kits are black variants. I guess not that many people actually follow genetics, but whatever. Still, black cats (and black animals of most species), are more prone to diseases and the like, so it's a little weird that they had so many kits, five kits is a lot considering the above.

Sisters―Mossybrook (Short-tailed dark gray and black she-cat with amber eyes. Very skinny. Excitable and nosy, but kind nonetheless. Alive, and at 1 1/2 years old, so eighteen moons. Same litter as Hollyheart.)

Okay.

Crowkit (Very small dark gray she-kit, with a stocky build. Shy and reserved. Died of hypothermia at 2 moons old. Different litter.)

Now that's what I call bad parenting!

Brothers―Darkstorm (Very dark gray, almost black tom with bright amber eyes. Kind and playful. 3 years old - that means 18 moons. Same litter.)

Nightpaw (Black tom dotted with white specks. Reserved, shy, and mournful because he blames himself for Crowkit's death. He is very introverted, hardly ever talks to others. 11 moons - almost a year old - which means he is soon to be a warrior. Different litter.)

If he's eleven moons, then that means that Ravenmist... Nevermind, I was thinking human gestation, but cat gestation is about 2 months, so I guess that's fine. Why would he blame himself for the death?

Mudspeckle (First things first, her HALF BROTHER. Same father. Different mother. Dark gray patched tom with a brown base. He has dark brown flecked all over his body, and white paws. Sympathetic and careful around excitable or easily irritated cats. 2 years old - 24 moons.)