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Just my first thought... I wish there was more :C It makes it much more fun for me + better for you + better for the character if you start with MORE. If you have a small bio, that means the character is pretty underdeveloped and will need a LOT of work.

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Name: Amanda

Okay... But what about her last name? Middle name?

Reason: Because her parents thought it was nice

I mean... okay? But then tell me more about her parents. What are they like?

Gender: Female

Okay.

Sexuality: Straight

Okay.

Age: 22-Unknown

Okay, so she's an adult then, alright. I expect to hear more about what her childhood was like in her backstory/history... except you didn't give her one...

Family:

They abandon her.

Adopted family is Grady and Edaline and Sophie is her sister

Why did they abandon her? Who were they? What were they like? So little bit of a Mary Sue here, I mean, maybe you're trying to do a Sophie's sister fanfic, but 1. little unoriginal, 2. why? Like, why did they adopt her? And how does she get along with Sophie? How does she get along with her adopted parents? When did they adopt her? Also, she's kinda old, so she doesn't need them anymore, like, did she move out, or is she still living in their basement lol?

Appearance: A tan, tallish girl who has blond, long hair that is often down but if needed will be put up in a pony tail. She has blue-silver eyes that are almost silver. Isn't a fan of girly stuff and is when every she can is in the least girly thing.

I'm sorry but I'm actually lmao, like that is the most stereotypical girl 🤣 Tan, tallish, blond, white, blue eyes. Okay, alright, but maybe add more about her clothes/does she like how she looks, etc. And there's no such think as "girly stuff," that's just what people perceive that "girls" would wear. So I'd definitely change that. And why does she do that? What would that look like?

Personality: She is open minded who love to read and spend time alone, often is found reading or help her adopted parents with the animals. Can get snappy and loves to have plans but can make up things on the spot. Good liar when needed.

Okay... definitely add more please :I I want to know more about her, but it's hard when there isn't enough. She likes to read and spend time alone, why? Is she closeted because she was abandoned, so she doesn't like to talk/like people? How does she help Grady/Edaline with the animals? Why does she help them? Why would she need to lie? Why is she a good liar? Why would she make things up on the spot? Why would she get snappy? What does she like to read? Who are her friends? How does she act around her friends? Is she bullied? If so, why?

Abilities: Shade (shadow controller)

How would that help her with being a vet? Does she like her ability? How does it affect her? How does it affect others?

Job: A vet for elf pets

When did she get her job? Is she good at it? Does she like it? What does she do? Where does she work? Let me know more about her job

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FINAL VERDICT-

I would give Amanda a 2/10. Listen, I'm sorry it's a low rating but... Please. Please. PLEASE. Add more :C I don't really have a good feel for Amanda at all... because I wasn't given much. If you add more onto her personality/looks/a backstory, I will review her again, but for now, it's not looking good :C

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