Okay. So I know the entire story really lead up to a much better ending. But, like I said, I am going to come back to fix it. I just needed it off my plate for now. I'll come back for the rotten leftovers later. But since I 1) feel awful about it and 2) really can't stand knowing this is out for the world to see, I'll delete the last two chapters and really, thoroughly work on them.
But not until summer. I have enough to worry about and I should really only spend my time working on things I want to work on. So just be patient for the better ending. If you want an awesome thing, then you have to be patient for it. Don't demand it.
Anyway, I'm redoing the ending. Just making sure you guys were made aware.
