run [max]

oh great heavens

hey. so. this is a bts or like extras chapter. im gonna show some original plans i had for the book, some deleted scnes and funnies. and just like talk lmao. i would love to see your reactions and comments if you proceed with reading.🫶🏽

but before we start, this is the last book in the series. but don't worry, i'm merging s5 with this book only because i'm expecting s5 to pick off exactly where 4 ended :)

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pt.1 things in thought about writing that made me laugh.

5. not her time

"It would make sense if you played or even watching us play d&d." Dustin scoffed at the still confused Steve.

"We'll I'm sorry that I like dating women." Steve responded, crossing his arms.

"Really Steven?" Y/N piped up, sitting up from her slouched position. "Last time I checked, I have a girlfriend. Mike has a girlfriend. Dustin has a girlfriend." She finished, enunciating the names. "And you?"

(y/n slayed)

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8. why are you apologizing?

As Nancy parked, they quickly climbed out of the vehicle and joined the crowd. With Nancy in the lead, she ushered the group behind a news van. Peaking over the caution tape, they listened to the officer's interview.

"As many of you know, the Roane County line received a call a little after midnight...reporting a homicide here on the lake. Officer Callahan here and myself arrived first on the scene. We made our way to the shore of Lover's Lake, about ten yards from that house you see behind me. It was there that we found the victim, an 18-year-old senior from Hawkins High, Patrick McKinney."

"Oh my God." Lucas whispered.

"His arms were cut off. His legs were cut off. His ears were cut off. His tongue was cut off. His eyes were plucked out..."

(y'all know the tik tok sound)

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10. electricans

"You don't think they went through?" Lucas asked.

"Through Watergate? Without us? Without a plan or weapons? They wouldn't be that stupid." Dustin replied in disbelief.

"I'd understand if it was Robin and Steve, because hey, they would do that." Y/N started, seriously considering her statement. "But Nancy?"

(i hope y'all got the reference 🤭)

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"I swear this is just a mistake. We were just hanging out."

"I can't believe you would do this to us. You'll be lucky if this doesn't go on your record." Her aunt paused to sigh, "I bet it was that little tramp's fault. I told you, you are forbidden to speak to her."

"She is not a tramp." Y/N snapped, ready to hang up the phone. "And first of all you're nothing but a trashy hoe."

"Second of all you suck dick."

"And third of all you're not a boss ass bitch you're a boss ass trashy hoe."

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and last but not least,

y/n after picking up jason's gun.

(following nancy's lead fr)

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og plans for book (written while binge watching s4)

-y/n was supposed to drag max to lucas's game (before i thought of the aunt's homphobia)

-originally, max hadn't got any of y/n's letters because she moved and y/n didn't know

-(after deciding on the aunt) max wasn't supposed to reconcile with y/n until ch.7

-after being on a time crunch, i scrapped max and y/n grocery shopping.

-when y/n brings up girl from maine and max gets crazy jealous and makes a big deal of it.

-jason and lucas would've tracked down y/n while she was alone (and that's when lucas would've joined the group)

-y/n was supposed to read her letter in ch.7 and write her own letter

-y/n would've tagged along with steve + gang to the upside down

-y/n wasnt supposed to hide, and stood and fought with lucas. (resulting in max's broken walkman'

-during y/n's possession she was originally supposed to show trauma from conversion therapy (in this version y/n would've actually got sent.)

-if y'all picked for both of them to be safe, jason would've been the 4th death. y/n or max was supposed to get minor injuries in the 'earthquake'

-max's letter was supposed to be originally y/n's letter. she was supposed to read it to max in the hospital

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CANON (to the series) THEORIES/FACTS

- y/n 'died' thinking that all her friends hated her

- y/n's aunt made her shred the letters max sent

- the book max read to y/n was one of the first wlw books i ever read. (you should read it or watch the movie, it's so good)

- there is a reason why y/n felt calm/relaxed when she 'died' (explained in s5!) and why her 'death' was unique from everyone else's

- y/n's first nosebleed was a placebo to make yall worried 🤣

- lucas was closer to y/n than mike was

- a girl from maine was rejected by y/n and she told y/n's aunt abt max as revenge.

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this is roughly my current agenda/to do list, subject to change !!

- clean up daisies

- clean up run + fear and release bonus chapters for run 🤭

- publish two/three secret fics 🙈

- wait for s5!!

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so honestly, im just really proud of myself. this is such a great memory and i'll never forget the excitement nd emotions i had writing this. so this is adieu for now. i'll be away for two weeks, but that doesn't you cant comment or message me. i just need a little time to focus on getting my sleep schedule back so i'm not tired for school. below are hopefully some stories to check out and hold you over until i'm back.

self promote your books here. :)

um. i love you all. drink water. eat something. stay safe. dont be like me and socialize. and stay tubular !!