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Platform 9¾

King's Cross Station. Up on a crossing bridge, Harry, Y/n, with the carts of their baggage, equipment, and pets, walk beside Hagrid. A couple looks at Hagrid, suspiciously. Hagrid: "What're you looking at? [He then checks watch] Blimey, is that the time? Sorry, Harry, I'm gonna have to leave you. Dumbledore'll be wanting his- well, he'll be wanting to see me. Now, uh, your train leaves in 10 minutes. Here's your ticket. [hands the train ticket] Stick to it, Harry that's very important. Stick to your ticket." Harry looks at his ticket. Harry: "Platform 9¾? But, Hagrid, there must be a mistake. This says Platform 9¾. There's no such thing...is there?" Harry looks up, but we now see that Hagrid has vanished, and Harry and Y/n are all alone with their carts. Harry is walking down the lane between trains. A man rushes by. Man: "Sorry." Harry sees a guard. Y/n walks towards Platform 9. Harry: "Excuse me, excuse me." Guard: "Right on your left, ma'am." Harry: "Excuse me, sir. Can you tell me where I might find Platform 9¾?" Guard: [incredulous] "9¾? Think you're being funny, do ya?" He walks off. Harry then notices a woman, daughter, and four boys walk by, pushing carts. Mrs. Weasley: "It's the same year after year. Always packed with Muggles, of course." Harry: "Muggles?" Mrs. Weasley: "Come on. Platform 9¾ this way! All right, Percy, you first." A tall boy with red hair, called Percy, comes forward and runs towards a brick wall. Amazingly, he disappears right into it. Harry is amazed. Mrs. Weasley: "Fred, you next." George: "He's not Fred, I am!" Fred: "Honestly, woman, you call yourself our mother." Mrs. Weasley: "Oh, I'm sorry, George." Fred moves towards the wall. Fred: "I'm only joking. I am Fred." He runs through the wall and is followed by his twin brother. Harry shakes his head in disbelief. Y/n: "I would've got a beating." Y/n runs through the wall next. Harry: "Excuse me! C-could you tell me how to-" Mrs. Weasley: "How to get on the platform? Yes, not to worry, dear. It's Ron's first time to Hogwarts as well. [pan to a red-haired boy, called Ron, who smiles] Now, all you've got to do is walk straight at the wall between platforms 9 and 10. Best do it at a bit of a run if you're nervous." Ginny: "Good luck." Harry takes a breath and runs at the wall. He shuts his eyes and emerges on the other side; a magnificent station at Platform 9¾ with a red train, which is the Hogwarts Express, and bundles of people. A whistle blows, and Harry sighs with relief. 

~In the train~

Y/n is looking for an empty compartment. Y/n: "Hello." ???: "Who are you?" ????: "What's your blood status?" Y/n: "Pureblood. Y/n Natalya Maximoff Potter." ???: "Potter married a mud-" Y/n: "Adopted by the Potters. Maximoffs are a part of a long line of witches and warlocks." ???: "Malfoy, Draco Malfoy." ???: "Pansy Parkinson." ????: "Blaise Zabini." Y/n: "Right. I've gotta go find Harry."  She leaves. Later on, the Hogwarts Express is travelling through the countryside. Harry is in sitting alone in a train compartment, and Ron appears in the doorway. Ron: "Excuse me, do you mind?" Everywhere else is full. Harry: "No, not at all." Y/n: "There you are!" Ron: [sits across from Harry] "I'm Ron, by the way. Ron Weasley." Harry: "I'm Harry. Harry Potter. That's my sister Y/n." Ron goes agape. Ron: "So-so it's true? I mean, do you really have the...the..." Harry: "The what?" Ron: [whispers] "Scar...?" Harry: "Oh." He lifts his bangs to reveal it. Ron: "Wicked. Do you dye your hair?" Y/n: "Nah, I was born with it." A trolley comes by the compartment, full of sweets. Woman: "Anything off the trolley, dears?" Ron holds up his mushed sandwiches. Ron: "No, thanks, I'm all set." [smacks lips.] Harry: "We'll take the lot!" [pulls out coins] Ron: "Whoa!" A bit later, Harry and Ron are not sitting together eating bundles of sweets. Ron's rat, Scabbers, is perched on Ron's knee, a box over his head. Harry: "Bertie Bott's Every Flavour Beans?" Ron: "They mean every flavour! There's chocolate and peppermint, and there's also spinach, liver and tripe. George sweared he got a bogey-flavoured one once!" Harry quickly takes the bean he was chewing out of his mouth. Harry picks up a blue and gold package. Harry: "These aren't real chocolate frogs, are they?" Ron: "It's just a spell. Besides, it's the cards you want. Each pack's got a famous witch or wizard. I got about 500 meself." Ron opens the package, and a chocolate frog jumps onto the window and climbs up. Ron: "Watch it!" The frog reaches the open gap in the window and jumps out. Ron: "Oh, that's rotten luck. They've only got one good jump in them to begin with." Harry sees Dumbledore's image on the card. Harry: "I got Dumbledore!" Ron: "I got about 6 of him." Harry looks at the card again, but Dumbledore has vanished. Harry: "Hey, he's gone!" Ron: "Well, you can't expect him to hang around all day, can you? [Scabbers squeaks] This is Scabbers, by the way, pathetic, isn't he?" Harry: "A little." Ron: "Fred gave me a spell as to turn him yellow. Want to see?" Harry: "Yeah!" Ron: [clears throat] "Ahem. Sun-" A girl called Hermione Granger, with bushy brown hair, dressed in robes, appears at the doorway. Hermione: "Has anyone seen a toad? A boy named Neville lost one." Ron: "No." Hermione: "Oh, are you doing magic? Let's see then." Ron: [clears throat again] "Sunshine, daises, butter mellow, turn this stupid fat rat yellow!" He zaps Scabbers, but nothing happens. Ron shrugs. Hermione: "Are you sure that's a real spell? Well, it's not very good, is it? Of course I've only tried a few simple spells myself, and they've all worked for me. For example..." Hermione goes over and sits across from Harry. He points her wand at his glasses and Harry tenses. Hermione: "Oculus Reparo." The tape on the nose-band vanishes, repairing his glasses as if they were good as new. Harry takes them off, amazed. Hermione: "That's better, isn't it? Holy Cricket, you're Harry Potter. I'm Hermione Granger...and you are...?" Y/n: "Y/n Potter." Hermione & Ron: "When did you get there?!" Y/n & Harry: "Been here the whole time." Ron: [with his mouth full] "I'm...Ron Weasley..." Hermione: "Pleasure. You two better change into your robes. I expect we'll be arriving soon." She gets up and leaves then comes back and looks at Ron. Hermione: "You've got dirt, on your nose, by the way, did you know? Just there." She points to the dirt mark on Ron's nose. Ron scratches his nose, embarrassed.