It's nothing dramatic
I'm just going to reconstruct this book, taking out the dream part.
I was committed to the idea of not allowing Alayna to come close to the life that Ayla lived. But now I think that she needs to go through it to really show how the mother and daughter's lives differ from each other.
How the support of a mother is possible even after death, in this case it's obviously the letters.
I've realised the book just doesn't flow, it could have had I left Alayna weak and the 'dream' part a lot shorter.
And honestly I'm struggling to write the next chapters. Like a lot.
So please do hear with me. I think a good number of chapters would need to taken down.
But it's necessary especially as the flow of the book seems to be heavily disrupted.
YOU ARE READING
It was always written ✔️
Aléatoire"Alayna would be no Ayla Khan." Sequel to 'Maybe it was never meant to be...' Follow Ayla's daughter, Alayna who uncovers secrets that have been deeply hidden in the soils of yesterday.
