-struggels- jedi and clone story {book 1}

Part 1

Felucia 22 BBY

Commander "melsh" POV

It has been three rotations since last contact. Where waiting for the squad to return or at least let us know they are still alive. We fear for the worst. In two rotations we will be relocated to the planet of Ryloth.

"start packing the 456th will be arriving soon and taking over!" I ordered my men.

"But what about Sly, Zigher and Scope. They haven't returned yet!" Blake protested.

"I'm sorry that I have to say this but they are gone for already three rotations they won't return. And we need to go report to the new general orders are orders if we disobey then now we will be court-marshaled, do you want that?" I almost yelled.

"sir yes sir." Blake said with a sad undertone.

Sly POV

"pleas stay with me Scope I can't loose you like I lost Zigher." I begged him. "Tell them what happened I'm sorry brother..." scope said when he took his last breath.

I started running through the jungle I lost my squad to those creatures. I need to keep moving I can't afford to rest at this moment.

Flashback the attack

Those weird bird things started to fly down and they grabbed Zigher. They just ate him. We started running for our lives hiding through the foliage we slept the night away in some cave.

Felucia 22 bby

Commander "melsh"

"SIR the guards are picking up a life form running towards the base!" Blake yelled. "it can be one of those creatures" I answered calmly. "it's a clone they got visual!" he replied back.

I ran towards the wall. There I saw him Corporal "sly"

"Sly where have you been?! AND WHERE ARE ZIGHER AND SCOPE!" I yelled at him, then I saw a large wound on his leg it was bleeding. "they...they are death...." He almost cried. "Come brother we'll get you patched up."

Felucia 22 BBY

Republic venator class start destroyer "the hellfire"

Admiral "Steven Stail"

[comms] "commander, we are receiving intel the new general will meet you at Ryloth when you join general skywalker his team to destroy the blockade." I said to melsh. I sure hope that there won't be any extra problems. I thought.

Hyperspace 22 BBY

Republic Venator Class Star Destroyer

Jedi Master / general "Reso lior"

I'm on my way to the Rendez-vous at Ryloth where I will transfer as general of the 894th together with my padowan. They say it's an elite battalion with the best men. I will be the judge of that. I thought.

When we drop out of hyperspace me and my padowan take the shuttle to Skywalkers cruiser, since 'the elite' men of the 894th haven't arrived yet. They are late. "Master what is on your mind?" Liyla my Padowan asked. "I have my doubts about that 'elite' battalion. They are late." "it will be fine they probably got stuck on there last mission" she defended them.

Hyperspace 22 bby

Republic venator class start destroyer "the hellfire"

Commander "Melsh" POV

"SIR, WE ARE LOOSING POWER TO THE HYPERDRIVE!" the admiral shouted. "HOW? WHAT HAPPEND?" I yelled back. "the hyperdrive has been sabotaged!" the crew man answered "where will we be dropping out?" I asked. "on our destination , Ryloth!" the admiral said when we get pulled out of hyperspace. "EVERYONE TO THE ESCAPE PODS!" I orderd.

Ryloth 22 bby

Republic venator class start destroyer "the resolute"

Jedi Master / general "Reso lior" pov

"sir the hellfire is dropping out of hyperspace the crew man said when I looked out of the bridge. The hellfire dropped in badly damaged and escape pods shooting out of it right before it goes on a crash course with the separatist fleet. "SCAN FOR SURVIVORS AND PICK UP THOSE PODS!" I command before looking at my padowan who looks with fear on her face. "you can go help, its alright." I tell her. She needs no other word as she runs out of the bridge.

Liyla Morin POV

I really hope they will make it I can't have those men die. I think when I pass a crew man and ask. " is there a casualty list?" "no commander there entire crew has abandon ship-" he gets cut off by a loud blast from the cruiser colliding with the separatist fleet. "at least the CIS have gotten some damage the cruiser served it's purpose "a clone in commander gear with a yellowish orange color pallet said. "Are you commander Melsh?" I ask "Present and accounted for sir!" he tells me. "what happened?" "sabotage from the hyperdrive room. We suspect it to be one of out men and I think just who did it." "then let go talk to our traitor." I say when we walk to the hangar.

"ATTENTION AL IN LINE" the commander yells at his men. "This is commander Morin our new commander the general is on the bridge. I am here to investigate who sabotaged our reactor until the culprit has been found no one will leave this hangar." The commander tells. "I am commander Liyla Morin For now you address me with sir or commander this will loosen when trust has been established! Now ct 5789, ct 1244, ct 4583, ct 1222, ct 1008,ct 4555 and ct 1441 you will be first questioned." I tell then before we start.

-2 hours later-

"what was your motive dex? You where one of our most loyal men." The commander tells with sadness in his voice." I did it to protect you the jedi will use us as slaves!" Dex snaps back." Slaves? Slaves you say I am trying to have a trust connection I care about the lives of the clones!" I snap before the general walks is. "is this the traitor? He asks "yes master, this is the traitor." I inform him. "Good lock him up I need you on the bridge for the battle strategy!" he commands. "as you wish master."

I walk on the bridge and we start.

"Padowan Tano will lead the fighter assault why Padowan Morin prepares a small landing team to land at the city and open up a landing spot for the relief team!" skywalker orders. "Sir if I may ask, why did you need us? You could have done it with only the 501st" melsh asks. "we want to have that landing zone that's why." General Lior snaps. "I think the general doesn't like us" he whispers to liyla. "yeah, I know he doesn't like clones but he said when I become I knight ill get the command of the legion. To be honest he only took me in to have another padowan trained on his resume he wants to get on the council." I tell him back while walking to the hangar when a clone stops me. "Commander there is a transmission from coruscant you are called back to the temple after the mission is done." He Informs me. "thank you trooper." I thank him and we part ways.

Ryloth 22 BBY

Landing zone

Commander "Melsh"

"we are nearing drop off all ready!" I yell "commander you sure this is going work?" I ask the commander. "no but we can't be sure of anything."

We touch down and it begins...

-1hour later-

"De zone is ours" I yell. "Good then I better get going!" the commander tells us.

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this is part 1 part  2 is also already finished but i want to wait until i'm in exam period before posting so you guys can read while i can't write!