Progress So Far

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Were at the beginning of chapter five. I would like to apologize for how sloppy the writing seems to be getting... I noticed that I messed up a lot and failed to change certain scenes, that I feel need to be more sexier. I would love to get your options on what you think should happed even though I have the whole book out in my head.

{Actually I added in a lot of parts because, when I play it in my head it cuts to different scenes and it cant be shown properly out on paper.}

Originally they ended up at the hotel without the sex scenes in the beginning but I added it for fun, also when Nozumi meets the mysterious man who almost kisses him... in my head that never happened, but I wanted to get (the mystery character) in the story earlier.

In about another three chapter I will post the character bio that has all there information I know your dyeing to see. Until Then Kittens >:)

DONT FORGET TO VOTE, SHARE, LIKE, AND COMMENT.

or I'll just have to send hiro to find you and punish you.


thanks for reading up to this far. I hope you enjoy.

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