Dungeon Troubles

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Now, I may have lied about this chapter's length, but I'm making it shorter so I can rewrite if the need arises. As I am doing a POV experiment/practice/change whatever! So read the next note! As it is important!

IMPORTANT: As a result of the existent POV problem the story current has (I heard your feedback people!), I'm attempting on writing and handling the POV's differently for this chapter as an experiment and practice. it's critical that you give me feedback in how this chapter is written, in terms of the POV. Does it affect the comedy (most important) and the way the story is told in a better or worse way? Of course depending on the answer, I'll either continue with this new style or return to the previous one. As such though, it'll take longer to write chapters, as the previous POV handling was the easiest for me to write. So I'd appreciate feedback on this chapter as soon as possible! So the changes will affect future chapters! Thank you! Of course, if the chapter is really poorly received due to the new style, I'll rewrite it.

As always reviews, feedback, comments, ideas and suggestions would really boost my motivation and capability to write you guys a story you would enjoy! And...

Thank you for reading, truly! and most importantly... Enjoy!

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-Author note end-

-The Dungeon-

-Middle Floors-

-14th Floor-

Back on the scene, proceeding Bell's shout of desperation towards Merlin and his subsequent refusal. Absolute silence fills the room, only bewildered and confused looks thrown at Bell from the Ishtar Familia.

A hopeless sensation fills the Hestia Familia at their last hope being snuffed out, as they cannot chastise or argue with the incomprehensible dragon in the current circumstance.

As the Ishtar Familia collect themselves from their bewilderment, confirming that the situation has not changed after Bell's desperate shout of a "Merlin" getting them out of there. Phyrne speaks her mind.

"Kekeke, is there supposed to be something there?" Phyrne cackles ominously, pointing at where the collective eyes of the Hestia Familia are directed at... Bell's right shoulder. A suspicious and yet amused look in her eyes.

At Phyrne's observant and perhaps obvious claim, They gulp loudly. A great secret of the Hestia Familia but a moment from being revealed.

""Yeah! What are you looking at! Tell us! You're not escaping anyway~!"" Their distressed reaction at Phyrne's observation does not go unnoticed by the other ambushers. A predator's amusement emanating from them. Confident that the Hestia Famila has no way to get away from them.

Both parties firmly aware of the sheer overwhelming difference between a First rate adventurer party and a Second rate adventurer party. The Hestia Familia exchange concerned and panic filled glances at each other, thinking of ways to divert attention from the troublesome dragon as well as to mitigate and avoid direct combat.

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