English Rewrite the Polin star

Letter from Colin to his brother viscount

Dear brother,
Thank you for the letter you sent me, I received it and I ask you a huge favour....
I'll be back in London soon, I'll leave as soon as possible, probably as soon as I find a boarding place. Please.....please don't consent to Penelope's marriage to the count!
I know that the wedding is imminent and I....I can't...I can't afford to lose her.
Yes... yes you were always right, you Benedict and our mother. We are made for each other, I didn't have the courage to court her before because I was insecure, I didn't feel up to her.
In short, you see her ... she is as beautiful as the sunset on a lake, she is intelligent and witty, every time I read her letters I am surprised by how much knowledge she has. And as sweet as the brownies she loves....And no brother....I know what you're thinking and no...I haven't tasted it even though, I'm ashamed to say, I wish I had every time I was actually watching her. But how was I going to break away from her then? What could I give him, I'm just a cadet... a third son without art or part. But now I have a promising future and I can give him everything I want and above all I'm ready to give him all my love, devotion and myself.
If she wants me.
So please delay the wedding, give me a chance to give her my heart so she can see what she wants to do with it.
See you later I'd be there in 8 or 10 days if the sea is in my favour.
Do everything to help this miserable brother who is about to lose the most important person in his life.
I will always be grateful to you for trying.
With brotherly affection,
Colin Bridgerton