PLEASE READ, not a chapter but i need some help

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Hey guys it's been a bit, I know. I've had some personal stuff happening along with school, so I've been quite preoccupied. But I have some updates for you guys as well as questions you may be able to help me with.

I've spent a while thinking about what to do with this story, i was losing sight of where i was going so I've decided to change some things. Please don't be angry, I'm hoping to make it even better. I'm not planning on changing the existing chapters, maybe the intro a bit, but they may be unpublished for a bit. Hopefully not be too long. 

To start, just so you're all aware, I will be changing the timeline quite a bit.

The canon Dance of Dragons takes place between 129 AC & 131 AC. For my timeline to work it will take place between 134 AC & 136. It's mainly so the ages of the kids line up right. Also the starting dates will be changed from 110 AC to 105 AC

Secondly, I just want to mention for future stuff, Daemon x Laena isn't a thing. As you are aware this is a Daemon fic and I've decided that there aren't gonna be other actually love interests, maybe just flirting or whatever with others (no cheating or other marriages, you'll see). Rhaena and Baela are still going to be born but I'm thinking of making them the children of Laena & Laenor. I figured that would be the best way to go with the Velaryon siblings, cause I was having a hard time figuring out what I was gonna do with them lol.

Baela and Rhaena are still going to be a part of the story don't worry, but they won't have as big of roles. While I am going to try and avoid stealing their canon plots for other characters, some may be similar. 

Now I have some questions I'm hoping you all could give me your opinion on. 

To start who could alternatively be behind blood and cheese? I ask because there are going to be reasons (I don't wanna spoil rn) why Daemon can't be involved. 

Next, how could i kill off Laenor? Or more so just get rid of him. Cause tbh i don't want him in the story after he canonically dies/leaves, mainly cause i have like no idea what I'd do with him.

Then, I don't want to steal plots from existing characters more than i have to, so does anyone have ideas on how i could kill dragon riders?

Also, I'm going to rename primraxas, the options are either,

Aegarax - God of all creatures that walk, run, swim or fly. Creator of the first dragon

or

Gaelithox - God of fire, stars, moon, sun and the dawn, rival of Meraxes 

I may update this page if I have more questions or updates :)))))





Please lmk if you guys have any questions or ideas you'd like to share, I'd absolutely love to hear from you guys. 

If anything else changes i will update you guys as soon as i can.

I hope you guys are all well, i love y'all so much

-ollie <3

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