The Critique Society (CLOSED)

1st Activity Moments With My Dad Results

Date Posted: June 21, 2015

Hello to all the Critique Society Members! Eto na ang pinakahihintay nating lahat, ang mahiwagang RESULTA. Yes po, we have the results you have been waiting for for the first activity pero bago po yan I want to CONGRATULATE THE TWO (2) WINNERS for our SPECIAL ACTIVITY called BEST CRITIQUE and they are:

1.MANDY_1826
2.nova_mae1201

Congratulations po!!! ^_^
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First before I announce the winner of the MOMENTS WITH MY DAD ACTIVITY, I want to explain the scoring. We had FIVE (5) judges that are not members of this book club. Each read all the stories and ranked them from highest to lowest then I assigned 5 points for the top ranked story down to 1 point for the fifth place entry for each judge. Then I added all the points to arrive at the winning entry. Here are the ranking.

MeasMrNiceGuy
5 = CynneDyRella
4 = Kimoojay
3 = IamMereanning_22
2 = Sweetscripts
1 = Chenillenapalan

gjordanjr
5 = Rampadora
4 = kimoojay
3 = Chenillenapalan
2 = IamMereanning_22
1= Sweetscripts

eagles_wings
5 = Sweetscrips
4 = Cynnedyrella
3 = WildSpiriiit
2 = ChristineCapilitan
1 = Iamreyaneskie
1 = Iamdreamer28

PrincessMakulit
5 = Rampadora
4 = IamMereanning_22
3 = Chenillenapalan
2 = CynneDyRella
1 = kimoojay

Love8wenshesmile
5 = WildSpiriiit
4 = Rampadora
3 = IamMereanning_22
2 = kimoojay
1 = CynneDyRella

Doon po sa mga hindi nabanggit, maraming maraming salamat po for sharing your wonderful Moments With My Dad stories and hope you participate again in the next activity and without further ado eto na po ang results.

Score = Participants

01 points = Iamreyaneskiee
01 points = Iamdreamer28
02 points = ChristinCapilitan
07 points = Chenillenapalan
08 points = WildSpiriiit
08 points = Sweetscripts
11 points = kimoojay
12 points = CynneDyRella
12 points = IamMereanning_22

We are pleased to announce the winner of our FIRST ACTIVITY (Moments With My Dad) none other than...

14 points = Rampadora (Let us Congratulate her)

This is her Moment With My Dad Entry
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Me and my dad shared a lot of memorable moments. but the most unforgettable for me was the first time I saw him Cried. He is a family driver. mayaman ang pamilyang pinagsisilbihan niya. Pero hindi maganda ang trato nila towards my Dad. PAlagi nilang minumura, palaging minamaliit, sinisigawan kapag gusto nila, at hindi pa pinapakain ng maayos. Umuuwi siya sa amin once a moth at tuwing uuwi siya laging ganun ang kwento niya. And then one time, umuwi siya ng marami ang dalang gamit. Sabi niya hindi na daw siya babalik sa mga amo niya kasi punong puno na siya. matatanggap niya ang pagmumura, at sigaw nila pero hindi ang apakan ang pagkatao niya. Umiiyak siya habang nagkukwento kung paano pinamukha sa kanya ng amo niya na maliit siyang tao kesyo daw hindi siya nakatapos ng high school, walang pinag aralan, galing siya sa mahirap na pamilya, trabahador lang siya . Sobra akong nasasaktan kasi inaapakan ng iba ang taong iniidolo ko. Alam mo kung gaaano kasakit na makita mo ang haligi ng tahanan niyo na umiiyak at sasabihing "Pasensya na kayo ganito lang si Papa. Pinangako ko sa kanya na noon na makakatapos kaming lahat sa pag aaral at bibigyan namin siya ng magandang buhay. Happy Father's Day Papa. Mahal na mahal ka namin. Sobrang thank you dahil kahit di mo maibigay lahat ng gusto namin, Naibibigay mo lahat ng kailngan namin. HAPPY FATHER'S DAY!

COMMENTS by the judges:

"It is touching how much the swallow his pride for the family that's why i like it."
- gjordanjr (5points)

"Wala akong masyadong masabi sa mga entries. I can't judge sa mga pinagdaanan ng papa niyo with you kasi its your moments pero mas naka-caught ng attention ko ang gawa ni Rampadora, naiyak nga ako."
-PrinsesangMakulit (5points)

"God will surely put some action sa mga taong iyon. I salute your dad for being hardworking. Thumbs up to this."
- Love8wenshesmile (4points)

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First, thanks to the judges for taking the time to review all the entries carefully. MeasMrNiceGuy gjordanjr eagles_wings PrinsesangMakulit Love8wensheSMILES.

Thanks once again to all the participants and hope you join our next activity. The winner will not be eligible for the next contest but hope you will give us the honor of being one of our judges. To all the winners we will pm you with the information regarding your prize... That's all folks! ^_-

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