Book: Mr. Professor
Author: sevennormalboys77
Reviewer: Kimchi
Title: (9/10)
Title is good.
Cover: (7/10)
Cover needs to be unique it's so simple author should try some editing.
Blurb: (5/10)
Blurb isn't interesting, I would say author should add something that makes readers want to open the book and read it all!
Overall Theme: (6/10)
Overall theme is fine but can be improved.
Prologue/ Intro: (7/10)
Prologue/ intro, is quite good but still needs improvement.
Pace: (8/10)
Author is consistent so no problem.
Character development: (7/10)
Character development is ok but not satisfied.
Grammar and vocabulary: (4.5/10)
I would say author needs a lot of improvement, I can understand author is new but she should work this out as soon as possible.
Concept and plot: (10/10)
Concept and plot is good but make it more unique as in add plot twists .
Tips or changes:
Author needs to focus on grammatical mistakes more, bring something new in story, make gaps between dialogues and other sentences, change the font of title of the book as it's cursive it's not that clear, use quotation marks for dialogues and more of punctuation marks is needed. All over story is good .
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