𝐑𝐎𝐒𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐋𝐋𝐄 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖𝐒| 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰 𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐩 (discontinued)

Loyalty and Duty (AVI)

Book: Loyalty and duty

Author: @CJ_PARKJENNYKIM

Reviewer: @snowywrym

Title: (8/10)

Depending on the cover it could be better.

Book cover: (10/10)

It is good but if author try to work a little more.

Blurb: (8/10)

I liked the warning author gave but it's quite confusing reading it twice or thrice can make it understandable.

Overall theme: (8/10)

If author try to go with the book cover it's attractive that attract readers but title and blurb makes it difficult.

First chapter/ Intro: (7/10)

Instead of using hard name author can use easier names that are easy to pronounce for everyone and she described it good but if she described the character and little information about BTS it could be helpful.

Pace: (10/10)

Pace is good

Character development: (10/10)

Like each and every detail is described even little things too.

Grammar and vocabulary: (10/10)

Finding mistakes is hard each and every thing is perfect in words but if it have some interesting parts then it's good and plots will attract readers too

Plot: (8/10)

Plots are good but like if it have something or line which attracts or add interest then readers can read it very fast.

Tips or changes:

Book tittle is not as good as cover. Title needs to be change as it doesn't go with book theme or cover. Story description is good but little confusing too i had to read twice to understand it.