Book: AGERE oneshots
Author:
Reviewer: bbymoa05
Title: (9/10)
Book cover: (4/10)
I think the author could use a bit of editing so that the cover could be better and maybe not have the symbol of you tube on it.
Overall theme: (10/10)
The theme it's really soft and bubbly and it's just so cute that you automatically fall in love with it.
Pace: (10/10)
Concept and plot: (10/10)
There is not a lot of room for plot twists but the concept of the chapter is good.
Grammar and vocabulary: (4/10)
I believe that the author doesn't have English as a first language so there's a lot of improvement to be done but the readers can understand what the author is trying to tell
Tips or changes:
I honestly don't have much to say for changes except the grammar and vocabulary that need improvement. I think that the way that the author connects well between the emotions of the characters and the flow of the story is really good and I have no notes whatsoever.
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𝐑𝐎𝐒𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐋𝐋𝐄 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖𝐒| 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰 𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐩 (discontinued)
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