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SHS - Seducer, Hacker and stealer (KIMCHI)

Book: SHS - Seducer, Hacker and stealer

Author:

Reviewer: Kimchi

Title: (8.5/10)

For the book (SHS -Seducer ,hacker and stealer) so the title is good but author can try something different too.

Book cover: (9/10)

Cover is well suited so no problem.

Blurb: (5/10)

Blurb isn't that interesting as most readers see the description before reading a book so I think she should work on that .

Overall theme: (8.5/10)

Overall theme is quite good.

First chapter/ Intro: (7/10)

Prologue or intro wasn't there but characters were shown and that's also good but she should describe more of the character like the age and personality and relation with other characters, it's just a idea.

Pace: (7.5/10)

Pace of the story is good.

Character development: (7/10)

Character development is amazing.

Grammar and vocabulary: (8.5/10)

I actually found less mistakes so that's not even a matter , she is good at it.

Concept and plot : (10/10)

I personally loved the concept and plot twists so 10/10!

Tips or changes:

Author needs to focus on grammatical mistakes more, bring something new in story, make gaps between dialogues and other sentences, change the font of title of the book as it's cursive it's not that clear , use quotation marks for dialogues and more of punctuation marks is needed.

I would suggest that she should be a little regular in updating chapters like at least once or twice a week, and yes P.O.V's needs to be specified I noticed she doesn't specify who's point of view it is sometimes.Although I loved the book!Thankyou