Scar Of Past ||Jk×reader (LINA)

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Book: Scar of past

Author: JustImagine418

Reviewer: Lina

Title: (9/10)

Book cover: (9/10)

Blurb: (10/10)

The author gives an example of what's to come and a small summary of the overall theme. It's very well structured and captivates the reader.

Overall theme: (11/10)

This theme is especially good, it has space to make a lot of plot twists and the author doesn't miss a single chance to make one, the readers are continuously surprised by the course of the story as in every chapter there is a new mystery to unlock.

First chapter/ Intro: (1/10)

 The author doesn't have an intro, it skip's right into the story. 

Character development: (5/10)

The character for most of the story is just trying to remember who she was so there's little development on the character, because we basically get the two sides of her right from the beginning. The only reason I'm giving it a 5 is the fact that the character Emily became braver through the timeline of the story.

Grammar and vocabulary: (10/10)

Tips or changes:

The only thing that I can point that needs improving is the explanation as to why Emily falls for JK. We can understand why after she finds out that she is Y/n, but even before that it just seems that one day she woke up and began to love him. Besides that the story is amazing and every plot twist is very well done.

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