Hey everyone. So... Because I published chapter 4 yesterday, there's something I've been wanting to ask you all. Is my writing terrible because of the anime references? Take this for example. Hiroko saw Sukuna in his imagination and Jogo's death played out with him replacing Jogo. Or even back in part 3 of chapter 1 when he was thinking about the the "time that he fought a Goku Stan".
So, with that... Is my writing terrible because of the anime references and cameos? Should I move away from all that and just do my own things instead? Or should I continue with the anIme references and character cameos?
Please help me with this. I might need to change to improve. The Mann is out.
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