Hi, srry for not posting. I've been busy with school and all.
In Ur guys honest opinion, should I rewrite this? I feel like I should, I also changed the title's name. If Ur new to this book, it used to be called 'All in the name of love-Beta lumity.
The reason why I think I should re-write this is bc I think I moved a little too fast with Lucia's and Amelia's relationship, I also think that In the description where Amelia is Cold and mean doesn't show that much here. I still think there's room for improvement. This HAD swear words but I replaced those with mild words.
Tell me what U think, should I re-write this or keep going? Originally I had the nxt chap ready, the chapter named 'new boy'.
Pls tell me Ur honest opinion
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24/03/24
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Broken Pasts - Beta lumity
FanfictionFirst book, apologies if there are any misspellings. I'll try to revise and edit the mistakes along the way. ___________________________________________ Summary- Two damaged and emotionally scarred souls, healing through love and confiding in each...
