Pristine's Problem || @IBA_005

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REVIEWER: IBA_005

REVIEW: Pristine's Problem by sparklet11


The intro of the book is forward, and it is quite a new dimension for me to look at. You did an amazing work with blending her thoughts into the written world. The description and plot are up to the mark. It was very interesting to read something new like that.

Title and cover: 9/10.
Both are simple, but quite eye-catching.

Description: 9/10.
The way words are blended together beautifully is a great help to attract the attention of the readers. It shows that the Author is trying their absolute best.

Plot: 10/10.
This is something new and interesting to discover. It is well-balanced. It has a touch of spicy mystery and a whole new world of fantasy. 

Grammar/punctuation: 10/10.
I am quite happy to see that there are no errors that I could point out. Words are blended very well and with the correct grammar, they stand strong.

Characters' description: 9/10.
It is very well managed and done accordingly to manage the plot which does nothing but make the plot exciting.

Overall: 47/50.
The book is written well. My little advice to the author is that just don't lose the flow of the book or it will break the momentum. Best of luck to you and your work. It will attract audiences when it will reach the right audience!

~Iba.

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