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This is a review on Forever is the sweetest con by Rosecherry2602 ♡
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1. Title & Story Description
I was instantly enamored with the story's title as soon as I saw your application (loved the Taylor Swift reference btw) . Even the book's cover is fantastic, and Jungkook looks great in it, but there is a tiny text error. It is impossible to see the text beneath the title clearly. I am not sure if it is because of Wattpad's terrible quality deterioration, but I think you should make it a little bolder or larger.
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Even the title is not that visible, but you may change that.
The plot summary, sometimes known as the blurb, is perfect in length and contains plenty of information. I adored how you included all the details about your narrative, including the 'read if you liked' portion, trigger warnings, and tropes. Although the length of the story description did rise, which is not ideal, the main portion is fantastic and wonderfully written.
2. Writing style & Characters
Your writing style is memorable. I adored how you illustrated and portrayed the various scenarios. Although you currently write in a fairly descriptive manner, I would advise you to go a bit farther. That, in my opinion, will enable you to excel as a writer and attain the highest level of perfection. In addition, you write with simple language and terms, so keep doing that.
Your characters' growth as people is skillfully written as well. The characters' relationships with each other felt real and open since they used simple language that we all use on a daily basis. The relationship between Taehyung and Jungkook was particularly well-portrayed!
Talking about the characters , I love how you depicted the job and age range of your characters and wrote a chapter on it so that your readers could relate to you as well!
Regarding reader's engagement, you have a moderate ability to capture the interest and curiosity of your audience. You are still adding new chapters generally and modifying a few chapters here and there, which is the main cause of this. You need not worry about it because readers often like to read novels that are finished. I am sure they will read yours once it is finished.
3. Grammar, Punctuation & Presentation.
To be honest, you have nailed this specific section. All I have to say is thank you for all your hard work on this. It merely demonstrates your sincere ability to become a well-known writer. There were no apparent punctuation or grammar errors that I could find.
Your book's presentation component is also done well. Although I felt your chapters were a little lengthy, it did not bother me because it kept me interested. I adored how you placed a few pictures of the text conversations amongst the characters here and there.
The author's note section is one thing I value about writers like you. It strengthens our sense of character connection to the book we are now reading. The 'thank you for reading' picture is also a really sweet addition.
I really liked how you included a little poetry in the first section's headline. I also thought it was a really well-organized division of the story into two parts. In addition, I really liked that you made a playlist! One addition you may make is to just provide the Spotify code, rather than the link that takes you to the playlist. It looks nice and is much simpler!
In summary, I was captivated by your book from the very first chapter. If you have any questions or concerns about this review I wrote about your book, do not be afraid to ask them. I shall be watching for your upcoming chapters and I hope you keep becoming an amazing writer ♡
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