Breaking Miliyon

BM ♾️: Lets talk

Hey guys 😗

So incase you guys don't know there are about 12 chapters left until the book ends. I plan to post an update tomorrow but for now let's talk about what's been happening throughout the book.

Note guys, that this is where you can freely share your opinions and thoughts even if you think it may be controversial. All of us are entitled to our own opinions right? So talk and don't just vote 🙄.

Now here are some of my own opinions. I'll start with what I think about Mila, because as you all know, how I write my characters have nothing to do with me personally, it's just me creating personas.

Now miliyon, in my opinion is searching and I think that's easily identified when you look at the fact that she can't be single.

Do you realize that she's only happy or at peace when she has a boyfriend? Even when she doesn't really have feelings for them?

We saw that with Joshua didn't we?

Now when Ajani came in the picture her attention shifted because she was intrigued, it had nothing to do with feelings at all.

I think the main thing with a lot of guys who may persue her is that they keep trying to prove their worth to not just her but her father.

Josh really did love her but he did mention getting the validation from Khalil; and we know Mila didn't really like him😭.

As for Ajani he was mostly smitten by the fact that she's khalil's daughter, he wanted nothing serious.

It was like a fetish for him, which sounds weird I know 😂 but it's the truth.

Now when Javier came along it was unexpected because Javier was living his life perfectly fine and so was Mila.

I think at first what caught Mila's attention was his presence, his boldness and the fact that he's an artist.

Now we all know she lives by her intrusive thoughts. Meaning anything she thinks, that's what she does, and that led her to just do anything with him without thinking.

That's takes me to my next point, I agree 101% that they had sex way too quick too.

She should've gotten to know him better but then that's how real life is sometimes, we don't always do things the right way, especially when we're young, some of us make stupid mistakes that can either lead to good if we're lucky or bad if we aren't.

In their case I don't even know what to say.

Their relationship started out questionable in my opinion but as things progressed both Mila and Javier started to understand and grow real feelings for eachother.

They're from two different backgrounds yes but somehow they managed to be each others peace. Their relationship didn't mirror Khalil and Judah's relationship, because for those who are coming from book one you guys would've known that Khalil could not function without the lavish lifestyle, because of his massive ego.

I think that's the difference with Khalil and Javier. Javier is humble and he'll build himself but Khalil wasn't really like that.

Do you guys realize that the problems in Javier and Mila's relationship are mainly caused by people around them?

Like It's always something beyond their control that causes issues between them. When you look at it they haven't gotten a chance to even freely be together because there's always an issue.

With this new development what do you think the next step is? Javier has moved on and we can't blame him for that.

Having love for someone is not enough sometimes and in this case we see that. Javier just needs peace and when he isn't persuing Mila that's when he gets that.

I have much more to say but I wanna hear from you guys, weigh in on anything.

Characters, plot development, thoughts for the future, whatever.

The next thing I wanna say before I finish my rant. Do you guys know why Khalil doesn't like Javier?

Or acts as if he doesn't.

When writing these characters I do pay keen attention to their past and when I look at Khalil I realize that he has mommy issues to an extent that's why he's so protective. He literally doesn't believe anyone can take care of Judah or Mila as well as him and I think that's coming from what his father did to his mother.

I know most times men with mommy issues don't treat women well but there is a flip side to it. They can either neglect or be overprotective.

This is so juicy 😩😩 but anyway I'm done. See you tomorrow guys.