𝐃𝐄𝐒𝐂: In which a heavy one piece fan, ends up in the world they adored so much. What kind of ways will they contribute to the story? Find out!
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𝐖𝐀𝐑𝐍𝐈𝐍𝐆: This book includes heavy spoilers, and I mean HEAVY. read at your own risk if you'...
Also, for clarification for previous comments about how Sanji treats [Name] like a girl when they r really gender neutral... It's because I was an idiot when I started this story and I didn't know how to make Sanji act around them because of this. Since most readers here are female instead of male, I made him treat the MC like they were a girl to cater to the majority of the female audience. In reality, I should've just made him neutral with them. From this chapter on, he's going to act neutral with them like I should've made him act before.
I'm sorry to the female readers that love Sanji -- but I need to respect the rest of my readers, too. You could say he has a hierarchy when it comes to his friends... Ladies first, MC second, the men of the crew third, and Zoro fourth. If that even makes sense.
Also, on Amazon Lily, I didn't really know how to write the MC there since it really depends if you're a female or male on the island. I'll probably go back and fix some moments where it caters to the female readers, and make it make more sense for male readers and readers that also go by they/them.
I've gotten a lot of experience since then, though! This was my first fanfic, so the start wasn't the best when it came to descriptions of the MC.
Also, Luffy doesn't seem the type to 'kiss' anyone, which is why he hasn't had a moment like that with MC...! To me, I feel like he expresses affection with playful actions and gives you more attention than he gives his crew without realizing it.
One more thing! Some older readers remember the MC being female — yes, that was the case when I first started. However, I felt like there weren't enough gender neutral fanfics, so I changed the MC's pronouns to they/them.
That's it! <3
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"ST. SATURN HAS DISEMBARKED! ALL UNITS BUT VICE AND REAR ADMIRALS, MAINTAIN DISTANCE FROM THE ISLAND'S CENTER!"
"AVERT YOUR EYES FROM HIS HOLY FORM!"
The Navy, Stella, and even some of the Straw Hats were watching in fear as Bonney stood still with her sword deep down in Saturn's skin. He didn't look bothered in the slightest, and was instead more irritated with all the yells of distress around him due to being stabbed.
"STOP SQUIRMING, YOU PATHETIC MAGGOTS!" Saturn demanded, and on cue, all the navy soldiers stopped abusing their vocal cords. His eyes were practically shining with confidence and annoyance. "If I did not wish to be stabbed..." He launched Bonney off of him, and grabbed her like she was a midget with his hand. "...I would have simply DODGED!"
