1.His return✨

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Everything feels so quiet and calm in India. The natural scenery is beautiful, with birds chirping and butterflies collecting nectar. Young boys happily enjoy their evenings after a stressful day at school. The evening atmosphere is refreshing and peaceful.

Or is it?

Absolutely not! Who says everything is calm? There’s a volcanic eruption happening in the minds of every player on the Indian team, and waves of anxiety are crashing into their hearts. The atmosphere is eerily silent, but it feels like the calm before the storm. So, what’s going on today?
The man who is believed to have betrayed India and was involved in match-fixing is returning after two years.

The tension in the room is suffocating Hardik. As he looks around, he realizes that another person is feeling the same way—Jadeja. He can sense what is going through Jaddu's mind. After all, they are among the few who have trusted Mahi Bhai.
Mahi bhai!!! Even the mention of his name has been prohibited from being spoken loudly. It's a pity that we can't even say the name MS. People only pronounce it when others are not around. Others despised him... The shocking news is that Virat and Rohit hated him. How could they???? They are the ones who are close to Mahi bhai and know him better than Hardik and Jaddu. Still...

It’s unfortunate that Rohirat not only hates him but also thinks he’s involved in match-fixing. Hardik and Jadeja don’t have any evidence to prove his innocence. Every video or photo seems to work against him. However, they still believe in him. Their hearts trust him. After all, they are Mahi Bhai’s kids.

In their team, only Jaddu and he believe in Mahi. He is unsure about the seniors; Yuvi Pa and Sonu Pa can’t possibly hate him, right? He just doesn’t know. Over the past two years, there has been no discussion about Mahi. Sometimes it’s frustrating how they ignore his existence, as if he’s a jinx. It was Saurav Ganguly who took the initiative to bring him back. Ganguly may not have hated him like others do. Is he the only senior who believes in Mahi Bhai? Hardik has so many questions swirling in his mind that he desperately wants answers to.

The main thing is that Mahi Bhai is coming! His brother is coming! Oh God, how much he missed him. He longs to return to his old self and be a kid again in front of Mahi Bhai. In the time that has passed, he has grown more mature, but he still wishes to be like a child again under Bhai's care. He desperately wants to complain to him and express his anger about how he left them. But the question is...

Does Mahi Bhai know that they believe in him? Does he understand their hearts, which only support and cherish him? Does he realize how much they want his return?
What if he believed that they didn't trust him? Does their bhai know they would sacrifice their lives if necessary? Again, there are so many unanswered questions!

Jadeja and Hardik are feeling both happiness and nervousness. Despite their nerves, they are thrilled to see their Mahi Bhai after a long two years. Those two years have been a challenging experience for them. So much has changed during that time. The ICT is no longer what it once was. Since Mahi left, cricket doesn’t feel the same anymore. The team, which used to feel like a family, has been completely fractured. It shattered like broken glass on the field.

Groups emerged within the team, which had once been a close-knit family. Now, it is divided into numerous small subgroups, with only two or three members each. For example, there’s the Harry and Jaddu duo, the Rohirat team, the Ishman group, and so on. This division has significantly impacted their performance, leading Dada to decide to bring back Indian players from their earlier days.

Jaddu and Harry often reminisce about the wonderful times when ICT felt like a family rather than just a team. The brotherly bond they shared during Mahi Bhai’s era was something truly special.

Emotions were overwhelming everyone in the room like a storm. When Saurav proposed the idea of gathering Indian players again, he faced overwhelming rejection. Yet, despite their objections, he decided to move forward with the idea. He wasn't sure where he found the courage, but it was the only contribution he could make for the country, for the team, and his Mahiya. He felt uncertain about how to confront Mahi since they hadn't spoken. As everyone knows, Mahi is not one to rely on his phone, so Saurav spoke to another person who claimed to be Mahi's manager. While it was somewhat irritating to deal with this situation, he accepted it, knowing that Mahi would be his priority. The manager didn’t introduce himself, but Saurav recognized the voice — it seemed familiar. Who could he be?

Let's not delve into that. Saurav, the man who transformed ICT into a family, is the reason for cricket's success, both directly and indirectly. He has always prioritized the team above all else, yet now he feels like a failure. Imagine someone's reaction when they witness their empire collapsing before their eyes and feel utterly powerless to stop it. The emotions are overwhelming: anger, sadness, and guilt. He desperately wants to rebuild what he once had, and he believes that only his Mahiya can help him restore the fractured ICT.

However, he feels he has failed as an older brother; he couldn't protect his kiddo. He had promised to always be there for him, yet now he sees himself as a terrible brother. In that moment of helplessness, he hopes that Mahiya might forgive him. After all, Mahiya is one of the few who has always believed in him.

Obtaining Mahiya's number took months. He got it through a secret contact, and all he knows is that Mahiya lives in an apartment with another boy. This raises an important question: Where are Sakshi and Ziva? Where is his family now? If they are not with him, then... where could they be?

Jaddu has always been known for controlling his emotions, but not when he's around him... Not in front of the great MS Dhoni. MS is the only person who can read Jaddu like an open book. Jaddu doesn't understand how he does it. Even when he tries to hide his feelings, MS seems to know everything about him. Mahi understands not only Jaddu but also everyone else. So why does Jaddu believe in him, despite all the proof seemingly against MS? It’s because his heart tells him to.

Jaddu has fought with his teammates to defend Mahi Bhai. Over the years, he has experienced a whirlwind of emotions: hurt, heartbreak, sadness, and sometimes happiness from his achievements. While almost everyone else seems to accept MS Dhoni's absence, he and Harry are not okay with it at all. They long for Mahi to scold them when they make mistakes, to teach them, and to praise them for their accomplishments. Even when the entire nation celebrates their performances, there is a void in their hearts, one that can only be filled by Mahi Bhai's approval.

Others may claim they hate Mahi Bhai, but Jaddu knows just how deeply his absence has affected them. Whether consciously or unconsciously, they all miss their Mahi Bhai. The whole of India misses MS, even if it’s just to use him as a punchbag. 💔

Suddenly, the door swings open, revealing a furious figure. It is none other than...

So here goes the first chapter.......

I know I destroyed the first chapter itself😖
I'm sorry🥺

Tell me what are the things that I should improve.

And who is person?
Where is sakhshi and zivu?
Who is the self proclaimed manager of mahi who lives with him?
And what do you think is mahi involved in match fixing?
In which group are you mahi's supporters or other?

Sry×100 for destorying the first chapter again......

Plz forgive me.....

Do tell me your ideas and suggestions

What will happen next??

And one more thing our men in blue is one last lap today. Let's pray for them💙

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