Author's Note (PLEASE READ)

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Dear Readers

I have devoted a lot of my free-time to this story. When I first picked up on it about two and a half years ago I saw a lot of things that I was personally dissatisfied with; while other things intrigued me. My younger self started this story with good intentions but I have somewhat better intentions. If you have already read through this story once you know it has/had many imperfections, plenty of spelling and grammar mistakes. The story had some parts that felt rushed and others that I felt were too immature. Let's just say after several months, multiple notebooks, and a playlist of inspirational music I have given this story a complete makeover.

As this note has been posted the story will officially have eleven chapters posted and the remaining two chapters in the works. I have kept a lot of my original scenes. I have just more depth and detail riddled throughout it. I have earnestly tried to embody these characters as much as possible. This is of course my own three year gap interpretation, I try to stay true to most of the original timeline but this is a cannon divergent story. Definitely give this story another read, pacing has been fixed and there is some new stuff in here of course. I have a better writing set-up and I have had my proof-reader go through all chapters so it should be a smooth read. Thank you to all of you who have already read the story and thank you to all who will give this story another try.

*Note for Trunks' Birthday

I know if you look it up it says Trunks is born in Nov of 766, if this was true this means he is walking by six months, now I know he is half saiyan but come-on that's ridiculously fast. I figured a June Trunks makes baby Trunks almost one when the androids arrive meaning walking is still early for a normal human but in the animation baby Trunk's is babbling, having small fits, and clearly understands facial expressions.

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